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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooOoo suspense...cant wait to see what gaaras gonna do in the next chapter..
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great udpate!! oh no, what'll happen when sasuke see's gaara in naruto's room getting a masage? probably all kinds of misunderstanding!!! update soon!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whine* Why are they arguing??? Please no arguments... Pretty sapishness in store for future of Uchiha and Uzumki?? Please?
Ano.. Your stroy is very pretty so far, but can there be a happy ending?? Please??
Ano.. Your stroy is very pretty so far, but can there be a happy ending?? Please??
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah! an update...i like this update because it finally sets up some conflict and angst into the story. i hope you find a beta soon. i would offer but my schedule is really hectic right now...GREAT JOB! just two mistakes that i found but its okay..nothing obvious.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, so glad tht you finally updated. I've been waiting. I like the addition of Gaara to the story, he's my favorite character. I would ask for a GaaNaru pairing but it seems you already have SasuNaru in my mind so I'll leave you alone. Just a correction to your glossary, whenever I've seen Dobe translated it's been translated as "dead last" not stupid or idiot or dumbass. I don't speak japanese so I can't really tell you for sure that Dobe means dead last but that's what I've seen. Anyways good job and please update soon:)
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o Wow. What a great chapter. I sense a little love triangle between Naruto, Gaara, and Sasuke. xD Such fun. So, Gaara smelled Naruto on Sasuke when they met, right? Or did I misread that? >_> Anyways. Naruto is busier than usual. He never actually had customers before, and now two. I wonder what Sasuke's reaction will be. After all, he still mistakenly thinks that Naruto is one of the prostitutes. Oooh, update soo please. If you need a beta you can e-mail me and I can try to do a few chapters for you. Whatever will help get the next chapter out faster. xD
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Chap. 7) Mwahahaha I forsee jealousy, misunderstandings and love triangles aproaching! Oh and sex too, let's not forget sex.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Gasps- I wonder what Sasuke ish going to think when he finds them!! =O Oh the shame!! xD
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sahhh ne...great chappie! ^_^ Well looks like Gaara likes Naruto now :sweat: guess Sasukes got a rival now for Naruto...so anyways great chappie again and can't wait for the next one! ^_^ Update as soon as you can! ^_^ Ja ne!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it.
Btw it's Daisuki, Daisuke is a name. ala D.N.Angel, lol
Love the story. So Gaara is after Naruto, poor Sasuke.
Wonder if Gaara is going to try to molest Naruto. Will Naruto be able to keep the doors open?
What happens if Sasuke barges in? What will be the sight that greets him?
Love the story, keep up the awesome work, Coolsa.
Btw it's Daisuki, Daisuke is a name. ala D.N.Angel, lol
Love the story. So Gaara is after Naruto, poor Sasuke.
Wonder if Gaara is going to try to molest Naruto. Will Naruto be able to keep the doors open?
What happens if Sasuke barges in? What will be the sight that greets him?
Love the story, keep up the awesome work, Coolsa.