rate_review Reviews

I love your story!
And there is a real plot!
That's just too good!
I love Shika with Temari but he is also with Ino... Will it be a threesome?
Anyway for a first lemon it was a good one!
Thank you for this story. Please, more!
Diane.

Ohhh!!! That agood lemon indeed!!! xD I can't wait till you start writing smex scenes!!!!! xD!!! Keep up the good work, ne? ^_^

Ja!

Good Chapter. Looking forward to more plot and action. Keep up the good work. Ja!

Not that bad...
I bet you got all nervous and blushed while you wrote that. I always do. :)
You need to learn to fill out the gaps a little more. Do you want some help in writing lemons? I'll give you a hand if you like?

the lemon was great and I can't wait for updates -^-^-

nice series you got here. although i keep getting confused with all the modern stuff being put in. this is supposed to be set in ancient days right? if it is, then i don't think they used briefs then. also don't emperors usually speak in the plural third person "we"?
anyway, don't mind my nitpicking. i really just like this series and those incidental things jar my reading sometimes. keep up the good work! hope the next chapters come soon.

yes, lemony!! hehehehe, XDD great job!! so is gaara talking about naruto love triangle!!!! yes, let them fight over him!! hehehe, great update!!!

UPDATE SOON!!

Yay!!! You updated!!! *gives you chocolates* ^___^ I loved this chapter sooooo much!!! Very cute!!! And I can't wait to see who Gaara's "dream boy" is........ ^___~ As for the the japanese, the only thing I noticed was your definition for "usurakontachi" -- I think that it can mean both "bastard of bastards" -and- "moron of morons", but I've read it more in the latter context and that is the way that most people define it when they use it in their fics. But again, it really doesn't matter, and chances are that it can be used both ways. ^^ Keep up the good work!!!

AH!!! It is AWESOME!!!! I wuv you so much!!! Thanks for updating!! Now, does Gaara dream of Naruto, or of Sasuke? What about SHika and Ino? And those other couples.... ah who cares. Neji's out... darn. I knew that though... but GaaraXNaruXSasu? not neccessarily at once?
Your lemons rule!! Actually it was more of a strong lime, but if you did a lemon it would rock.
Update soon, oh wonderful writer of fics!

Very interesting development. Gaara's appearance will definately put a wrench in things. I'm interested in seeing what happens with the Sand Siblings, particularly Shikamaru and Temari and Gaara.

It was a good job for a first lemon. However... there is a better technique for oral. If you want, I can describe it to you. Send me an email. However, it is quite graphic.

Update as soon as you can! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.