rate_review Reviews

I started reading your story about 15 hours ago, and YES I took breaks, . . .. and omg, I just have to say that I really love it. I actually found myself crying when he held Naruto after his lil accident, only to have the blonde apologize and that he was only giving Gaara a message. Poor lil guy. Glad he's okay. Tsunade is so awesome. I really can't wait for the next chapter ^-^ To be honest, I didn't think that I was going to get interested in this story. I mean, I read so many different fanfics and I find myself being a critical judger at time. Not about the writing material itself (For an example, like vocab usage) . . . but about how the author work their plots. I love the way you formed yours. And I find myself rather liking the idea of the raven haired teen being possessive of the one he cares about. It's cute. ^.^ I'll check up on your page occassionally to see when you update. Hopefully is soon. But as an Author myself, I don't push ppl, and I'm very patient. So take all the time you need. You said that you didn't really like your latest chapter, but I loved it. ^0^ I find that I'm very angry for what Sakura did. That was really wrong and twisted. It made me . . . pissed. Atleast she already has someone that likes her. I mean honestly, what's so good about looks, if they can't satisfy you? It's like choosing a meal that look wonderful, yet tastes like crap, over something that looks plain, that tastes delicious. okay, I'll stop my random babbling, and I apologize that my review is so long. Couldn't help it ^///^


Good luck with your next chapter. oh, and you mentioned a couple of times about having writers block. Have you tried writing one-shots? They usually do wanders for writers block. Well, just a suggestion. Can't wait to see who Temari picked, and I'm really curious to know what Neji is going to do about Hinata-chan ^^ Again, good luck ^.~



~Redwitch05 ^_~

i say like sakura... eiii??! (or something like that wasn't it?)more more more!!!
this is sooo great, you're a genius! one: making hinata into a prostitute gave
me really big doubts from the beginning, but somehow... i guess there's a lot of
men who'd go for the silent and shy type, eh?

...uh... bad pictures... i'm sorry, i take that back. i'm just so very glad that kiba
and hinata found each-others so quickly, but i'm still qurious about if neji will
be able to get hinata into the hyuuga-clan again... that would really take away
a few obstacles for our dear dog-boy and the love of his life, eh?

two: i got worried when you made the sakura/sasuke-problem appear in the fic.
i was afraid that pinky would start to destroy things for cute little naru-chan and
his prince... hehe but you solved that just fine, and managed to not make sakura
a complete i-refuse-to-let-go-of-my-silly-fantasy-and-see-the-truth-girl, like she
is in the series... i don't like when people make her the bad... ehm... guy... so
easily... the world doesnät go in just black and white, right?

three: i've been trying to figure out the realtionship between gaara and naruto...
because didnät you mention something about "redhaired demon" or something
like that when you spoke about naruto's dad? could it be that they are family or
something...? maybe even halfbrothers?! that's be soo great! naru-chan, the great
prince of sand! woohoo! and then there'd be no obstacles between him and sasuke,
at least not when it comes to status, ne?

ooooh, i'd really like that...


aaaagh...! i'm just DYING to knoe who temari chose! it better not be shikamaru; he
belongs to ino!!!! at least in this fic, though i'm honestly a shika/tema fan from the
beginning... ^^

reading the existing chapters took too little time... when i got to number eight i had
a real shock, thinking; no more? it's nothing here yet?! NOOOOO!!! and now i'll be
waiting with anticipation for your next update! ^^

oups... rewiev got kinda long... gomen ^^

hugs /elict

Awesome! No wonder you got so many reviews in just a few chapters!! This story is a huge acocmplishment and please continue soon! Don't give up on it cause I really really like it!!!! Update soon! Though there is ne thing, you know, I was kinda wondering why Sasuke, the 'cold bastard' (not trying to offened or anything) was able to say in despare and love in his voice," PLEASE DON'T DIE! I LOVE YOU NARUTO!" And sob at Naruto's close to death accident. It was very surprising for me to see him so sentimental and changed in such a short amount of time without any detailed reasons why apart from the fact he had fallen in love with the blonde in two days? This is NOT A flame so please!!! *pupy eyes* update!! I really like your story! Just that tiny part kidna made the whole feelings feel...wrong. Nevertheless, you are an awesome writer and continue soon!!!

omg! great story! found you on ff.net and decided to come get the full version. ^^ anywho, I love the stroy so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!...SERIOUSLY!! *starts shaking monitor hoping by some luck it would jar the next chapter up*.......*time passes*....*still shaking monitor*.....*sinlence*....guess it didn't work.. *sigh* that leaves it up to you! Good Luck!....and BEWARE of the squirrels! They'll attack at dawn!..unless they forget again...but BEWARE anyway!....They are bound to remember one of these days!.....and then they shall attack!..at dawn!
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-Ryooki-

I love your story! I'm sure you hear that a lot, but it's so wonderful. My dilemma is that I want Sasuke and Naruto to be happy but Gaara is so cute in his ways and part of me wants Naruto to run off with him. It's teasing my brain trying to figure out how you'll take this story further. Please update soon! <33 Much luff!

:D UPDATE NOW!

Shikamaru Shikamaru Shikamaru Shikamaru! Make her pick Shikamaru, Puh-lease! Oh well, if she ends up picking Sasuke that'll be okay too. He'll just have to find a way out of it ^^ Sasunaru OTP!

JAW: Very well written and nice cliffy!
Naruto: Nice cliffy?! Aren't you dieing to know what happens?
JAW: Of course, that's why the cliffy was nice, it makes you actually want to read on! So update!

I really like this story so could you please update soon?!?!?!?! And will we ever find out who Naruto's father is??? (Do you know who Naruto's father in the anime is????) I do but I don't know if you know so I wont say who....but if you do could you please work him into the plot???? PLEASE!!!!! *loves him* ^^ Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

-The Update Monster

Please update!!!! I'm really anxious as to whats going to happen next, I'll keep reviewing if I must to get you writing again XD;