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cool story!!!!!!!!!really superb!!!!update soon!!!!!!!^^

god...that was beutifull...*crys*...

this chapter was interesting. are we going to see some kind of triangle between shika, ino, and temari now? hehe, update soon. and hmm, jiraiya as emperor... didn't see that coming ^_^ wonder what other surprises are in store.

Your diction is so big compared to mine! haha. Like always, good chaptrer! Hope Temari doesn't choose sasuke! It's sasunaru!! let tehm be together to do the naughties!! haha. jk jk (maybe?) This is very interesting. it's developing really well. update soon. PLEASE! ONEGAI!

i hope that u keep up with this story, it's really interesting....hope to read more soon. (All the crazy fan grlz luv SasuNaru, me included)

i like! great writing as usual... the plot's really thickening, but its good...

sooo.. will shikamaru and temari end up together? or ino... mmm... you totally got me there.

nonono... long chapters are good too!

*holding out for more sasunaru to come!*

Waiii!!^_^ Good work, keep it up, ne? ^_^

Ja Ne

Yay, another chapter of the story I've been following. I like it, but I am interested in why Shikamaru befriended Naruto. It seems a bit odd except to maybe pump him for information and get dirt on Sasuke. Which leads me to ask a question, is Sasuke going to 'visit' Naruto in the next chapter? I'm sure whenever that pops up it will be a fun scene to write because I can imagine Naruto going crazy and acting like a goofball. It's sad to hear Hinata's past but it's cool that you're moving the story line along. Well goodluck and I hope you update sometime soon!

o.O Temari's the princess?! I thought.....TenTen was......>< if she is I bet she's gonna go for Sasuke....well it could take a turn for someone else...XD ARG! Please update as soon as you can!!!!

This was, over all, a very good chapter. However, I noticed that your inconsistency between past and present tense was a lot more apparent in this chapter than the last few. The last chapters there were some inconsistencies but nothing too distracting. I also felt that last few chapters were beautifully detailed and really well-written. This chapter was, of course, also well-written but I felt like you were really rushing things. I DID like the chapter, of course...and I adore your story. I just think you should have done a closer editting of the chapter before posting. I hope you don't take offense ^^; b/c I'm not trying to be rude or anything.

In any case, I am excited about Temari getting her pick of the men XD...luck little *grumble* censor *grumble* hehe...And Jiraiya is emperor? that one made my eyes pop! But yeah, good twists building here. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^