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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww. the clash between naruto and sasuke is so cute. i'm glad you're prompt with updates. don't torture your fans too long, hehe. :D
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*nosebleed*
*faint*
so................cute..........omg, MORE SASUNARU ACTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*faint*
so................cute..........omg, MORE SASUNARU ACTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great work! your style is really good - it actually got me hook on the story, consider the subject matter
keep it up baby
keep it up baby
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story....!!I can't wait your next update. Can I ask you where are you from? I'm from Finland (if know where it is). I don't know what else to wright so I'm going to wait the next chapter.....=)
By:Pia
By:Pia
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i don't read Naruto yaoi that often becuase... it just doesn't appeal to me for some reason, but....... THIS IS SOO GOOD! update asap please ^_^ and keep up the good work
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe... sasuke wants him xD hee hee... and O.o wondering about hinata... this is an awesome fic! can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XDDD This fic is shaping up real nice! Too bad Sasuke didn't actually get to screw Naruto's brains out. But he will soon, ne? ^______^ The scene with Naruto, Shizune, and Tsunade was funny!
I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for Sakura or not. If she would just lighten up I'm sure she will like Lee just fine. I'm very happy for the other girls though! I hope things turn out well for them.
I can't wait to see the explanation Neji gets. I'm really curious about how something like that could have happened.
Kakashi-sensei was great. XD *hugs him* I'm amazed that Jiraya can be such a pervert even asleep. Oo He deserves some sort of recognition for that.
=^_^=
MEOW!
I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for Sakura or not. If she would just lighten up I'm sure she will like Lee just fine. I'm very happy for the other girls though! I hope things turn out well for them.
I can't wait to see the explanation Neji gets. I'm really curious about how something like that could have happened.
Kakashi-sensei was great. XD *hugs him* I'm amazed that Jiraya can be such a pervert even asleep. Oo He deserves some sort of recognition for that.
=^_^=
MEOW!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOO GOOD. I ALMOST DIED OF LAUGHTER. GOD DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY, IT KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
golly, a fic I can get into! it's really cute so far. I can tell you're a fan of Memoirs of a Geisha ^^
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm...i liked this chapter better than the last one
the beginning scene where sasuke wakes up with Naruto was great, it was interesting to see sasuke check if his arse hurt or not (i guess he bottomed for someone before?)
i think the really enjoyable part of this chapter is the fact that naruto made the others believe that he had sex with sasuke. you have a different way of approaching the plot from the authors that i usually read. they usually like the tease the readers a lot with unresolved suspense, but you like to resolve the suspense within the chapter while they go on for multiple chapters. It's different in the sense that the suspense doesn't really build up, but it's good that the same time because the plot actually moves at a decent pace. I'm not saying that there's no suspense, just less.
In my opinion, Hisashi at the end was a little ooc. When Neji asked him about Hinata, I can understand that he was shocked and dropped his chopsticks and bowl. But I really can't see him as someone who would immediately make a silly excuse to check out the situation or whatever. Ah, maybe he didn't know Hinata was alive. oh wells.
The rest of the chapter was great and thank you for writing.
the beginning scene where sasuke wakes up with Naruto was great, it was interesting to see sasuke check if his arse hurt or not (i guess he bottomed for someone before?)
i think the really enjoyable part of this chapter is the fact that naruto made the others believe that he had sex with sasuke. you have a different way of approaching the plot from the authors that i usually read. they usually like the tease the readers a lot with unresolved suspense, but you like to resolve the suspense within the chapter while they go on for multiple chapters. It's different in the sense that the suspense doesn't really build up, but it's good that the same time because the plot actually moves at a decent pace. I'm not saying that there's no suspense, just less.
In my opinion, Hisashi at the end was a little ooc. When Neji asked him about Hinata, I can understand that he was shocked and dropped his chopsticks and bowl. But I really can't see him as someone who would immediately make a silly excuse to check out the situation or whatever. Ah, maybe he didn't know Hinata was alive. oh wells.
The rest of the chapter was great and thank you for writing.