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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Coolsa.
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this story isn't too short cuz i feel like the characters are beginning to flesh out. I love your story, it's soooo cute! Just one thing that I can point out and that is Neiji's father's name is Hisashi and his uncle's name is Hiashi in the manga (thier twins and Hisashi is the younger brother of Hiashi). Keep track of your personal pronouns cuz I saw "his" instead of "her" in a couple of spots. Very good story! I wait for your updates!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gawh hah hah, that sure was embarrassing as hell for naruto. update soon!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! Bad place to end it man! =( But loving it anyway. Haha It was hilarious when Tsunade and Shizune drew such..conclusions. ^^
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far! Poor Naruto! *snickers* I thought by buying him Sasuke meant he wanted to take him home with him? Or did Tsunade talk him out of it and compromised instead? Well, whatever, I can't wait for more of this story. Great picture of Naruto btw. I loved it. XD
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is really coming along can't wait for the next chapter.
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O wow what is Sasuke thinking I wonder....haha nvm I don't wanna know. So Naruto will not be sold to Sasuke but will be his entertainer? haha hm I wonder if the other lords will be returning soon....=P please update soon!!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 4)
WONDERFUL!^^
But you really should add a glossary when using Romaji. K'? K'!^^
Update soon! I would really like to see more!
WONDERFUL!^^
But you really should add a glossary when using Romaji. K'? K'!^^
Update soon! I would really like to see more!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a really cute chapter ^_^ It's hilarious that Tsunade just pushed the boy down and checked out his anus just like that XD...no shame!! haha...um, yeah. And it's really cute how you're developing the other relationships as well. I really like all the pairings you've set up although I kind of wish you would have been more daring in your pairings, hehe....but it's really quite alright, b/c, like I said, I like all those pairings anyway ^_^
I'm also glad to see development elsewhere, like with Hinata being a Hyuuga and Neji dealing with that issue. Judging by his actions, I guess Neji wasn't as smitten as the other boys were, hehehe...with Shikamaru, you never know either though. Gah, I'm rambling again. Sorry ^^;
In short, a very interesting and well-written chapter ^_^ I look forward to the next update!
I'm also glad to see development elsewhere, like with Hinata being a Hyuuga and Neji dealing with that issue. Judging by his actions, I guess Neji wasn't as smitten as the other boys were, hehehe...with Shikamaru, you never know either though. Gah, I'm rambling again. Sorry ^^;
In short, a very interesting and well-written chapter ^_^ I look forward to the next update!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *gives you chocolates* Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Now then: *hands you a pen and some paper* ...go write more, please!!! ^___^