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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this story is sooooooo good please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god. I love this story so much.
*worships*
*worships*
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!!! that was sooooo good!!!! i loved it!!! hahaha, funny XD Kyaaa!! i wanna read everybody's reaction, heehee... i wonder what shizune actually saw?? hmm...please update soon? i'm hooked! =D
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, hahaha...To be honest, when I first read your summary, I was a little dubious at the storyline b/c...well...frankly, I've read a lot of Naruto-as-a-girl fics and I canNOT STAND it when authors turn the poor kid into a female...I mean, he's a ninja! A MALE ninja who can kick ass so stop making him into a feminine little girl!! (That wasn't directed at you, XD)...ok, sorry, that was my spiel.
ANYWAY, get to good stuff, right? Well, I decided to go ahead and read a few of your paragraphs b/c as everyone knows, a good author can turn a mediocre plot into an amazing story...and likewise, a bad author can turn an amazing plot into a horrible story. What you do here is create an amazing story out of an otherwise iffy plot. But the thing is, as I continued reading, I realized this was actually a pretty unique plot! So, I did a complete 360. I finished chapter 3 and I am now fully enamored of your story XD. So, I totally adore the direction your taking this story and I am looking forward to an update! ^_^
You're writing is excellent! The only problems I found were inconsistency between past and present tenses ^_^ Otherwise, wonderful story!
ANYWAY, get to good stuff, right? Well, I decided to go ahead and read a few of your paragraphs b/c as everyone knows, a good author can turn a mediocre plot into an amazing story...and likewise, a bad author can turn an amazing plot into a horrible story. What you do here is create an amazing story out of an otherwise iffy plot. But the thing is, as I continued reading, I realized this was actually a pretty unique plot! So, I did a complete 360. I finished chapter 3 and I am now fully enamored of your story XD. So, I totally adore the direction your taking this story and I am looking forward to an update! ^_^
You're writing is excellent! The only problems I found were inconsistency between past and present tenses ^_^ Otherwise, wonderful story!
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv it! Ive been waiting for a story as good as this one to come along for a long time!!! =] Please update the story as soon as possible!!!
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More! More! More! Damn, Shika is SOOO SEXY!!! I WANT HIM! Heheheheheheh!!! Sasu is hot, too. And Kiba and Hina are soooo cute. THIS FIC IS TOO HOT! You're great! More! More! More! More! More!
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD...please update soon....what happens?!?!?!?!?!?!?! update soon please
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter and the plot thickens! Tons of misunderstandings on the way but is so cute to see how attracted both of them are to each other. I really like this fic, it has an interesting plot! Can't wait to see more of it.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only one word could explain the brilliance and humour of this AWESOME fic! ............................................w00t!!!!!!
xD Hell yea! LOL. Make more dammit... must read chapter 4 O.o ...
xD Hell yea! LOL. Make more dammit... must read chapter 4 O.o ...
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*nosebleed*
Please continue.
Please continue.