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You so better finish this story. XD

This is honestly my favorite story on this site right now. I love it! ^_^ Such a great story line. Sasuke is acting just how I would imagine him to act, too.

Please update soon, or I shall stalk you and hold you hostage with a spork.

let the misunderstandings conquer the rest of the characters XD that was too hilarious XD

hi, this chapter was interesting. i can't wait to read about when they wake up and what sasuke will think. i'm hoping that's where the next chapter will pick up from. cos i am very interested in what his reaction will be when he wakes up. update soon XD

Interesting!!! Especially Sakura spying on the other to know where her Sasuke-sama is, the idea of the drug in the Sake was good too... and Sasuke kissing Naruto just too good!!! Update soon^^

^^ You would not believe how much I danced in happiness when I saw this chapter! Hehehe..
Again, gorgeously written. I love the graceful conclusions to each relationship--each scene paints a different type!
All of them are so satisfying--I enjoyed the Ino/Shikamaru, that there was love there, and the raw emotion expressed. ^.^ It's great!
And to place it in Sakura's view is ingenious as well.
Your descriptions are wonderful, nicely done! :clap:
I'm sorry that this chapter was difficult for you to write! If it's worth anything, I truly enjoyed every word, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!!
Best of luck to thee! :hug:
~michi~

WONDERFUL!! I had so much fun reading this chapter and boy oh boy, that lemony part with shikamaru with ino and sasuke with naruto...whoa, that was really COOL!!!!!!!^^ keep going!

It was funny! XD Damn, I want to know what will happen next T_T

wonderful story, just wanted to make a quick comment on some grammar/style. This line -

"Sasuke grabbed Naruto’s hands and flopping down onto the bed from the weight of the said boy"

1 - flopped instead of flopping
2 - well... i'm not sure you can really flop if the weight of someone else is pressing you down, flopping is more light. you know like you flop on the bed when you get home and want to think about your crush.

Completely incidental to the rest of the story, doesn't really detract anything from it at all, just so hard to find things to improve in this story the one thing you find ends up being pretty small.

Ne, ne... fic wo tsuzukenasai... ne, onegai... *makes pleading eyes* Ne?

(Ch. 1-3)
Such a wonderful and original idea!!!!!
Update soon, please!!!



Ja ne~