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for Konoha Garden

by etacarinae

person rainbird
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Dirty little Naruto...
person Saki
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was alittle hillarious but very cute. I think and I hope that Sasuke still would come and visit Naruto...even if he did doze off because of the powder that was in the drink...^^;; But I can't wait for the next chapter.That one was just awsome!
person dtligvrtbfhrdyve
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
need more!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...(update plz!...)
person Ezj
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is absolutely great^^
But an evil cliffie... but thats just want me to read
more... YAY a great story... more more more^^;
person peachblossom
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very hot, m'dear! can't wait for the next installment!
person Jadetiger
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think i like this story.. very much indeed!!
person kayoko
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated!~ *is happy*

The first two scenes with Neji and Shikamaru were great. I loved how you wove in a little bit of mystery about the background behind these girls into this chapter. Shikamaru is such a sweetie. ^_^ Kiba..well, he wasn't funny in this chapter so no comment on him except that he's lusting..not loving.

Sakura and Lee, poor Lee (now how does it make sense the the client has to do work for the lady he bought for the night?) It would have been funny if Lee and Sakura played a bit of tag before Lee went unconscious. Man....just imagine dear Sakura running for her dear life around the room while trying to be nice ^_^; ah..i have rambled, sorry.

*nods* Well, it was cool that Sakura went around checking up on everyone..well except for Naru-chan. That was very much in her personality, I believe.


As for Sasuke and Naruto interaction, to be honest I was a little disappointed. I enjoyed it dearly, but I was expecting something more (?) It feels like all this suspense from the previous two chapters and we end up with Naruto running to Shizune for help. I was expecting a lot more teasing from Sasuke before he reveals that he knows that Naruto's a guy. Something like a game where the loser has to strip and Naru-chan has all this confidence in winning the game but he loses to Sasuke ..and Sasuke starts coming on to him or something. Oh wells, drinking contest minus the stripping is cool too.

The line " ‘must be the drug’" was hilarious and very Naruto-like and funny how it looked like they had sex, but they didn't.

ah..sorry about my rambles. thank you for writing.

can't wait til the next morning XD
person angel ran
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*also gets nosebleed* O__O omg...that was...perfect. What an excellent mental picture..... XD LOL I can die happy now. Well...go do my stupid readings with happy pictures in my head, at least :') *sniff* Ooo man, was that hot though, lol. ^^ Hahah, Kiba-kun and Hinata are so cute XDDD And even though i don't read het stuff much (i'm so odd..???) the shikaino scene was well-written, and even neji is doing okay ^__~ ....but, poor Lee O__O he just can't win. =^__^= but ooooh my goodness..... *FAINTS* Seems Sasuke didn't mind that Naruto was a guy...and the other way around!! Mmmmm Naruto.....so daring, hehe
.....but........I wish i could have been in Shizune's place!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAAAAH!!!! *HEART*
Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!! YAAAY
person T.K-kun
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've been waiting for your update!! this was really interesting. wish it had to do more with sasuke and naruto. i like this story, it's really interesting.
person Crystal Child
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe, I squeal every time I see this is updated...I love this soooooooo much! Keep up the awesome work!