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OK, this: "The raven haired boy slowly moved closer, and kneeled down beside Naruto. He slowly flipped the blond over, careful not to wake him from slumber, and propped him on his knees, elevating his backside, whilst his face was still pushed comfortably on the futon. Sasuke moved behind the boy, and got on all fours. With mounting apprehension, Sasuke slowly lifted the kimono.

The door suddenly slid open with moderate force, and Sasuke froze with the kimono half way up. He turned his head slowly to the door, only to see an equally frozen Shizune with blood spilling from her nose, and a grinning man with spiky gray hair, wearing a mask and eye patch.

“Yo.” Kakashi greeted his master."

was just too funny! i could so see it happening in my head.

also, this is a cool story. but the thing where sasuke like, drops the ramen, don't follow me stuff... maybe it's a little too dramatic. a lot of his actions fit his character, but you can't get away with make a big deal over minor details. like, if naruto's gonna get depressed enough to cry, at least make sasuke tell him to "fuck off" or "i hate you" etc. etc. otherwise, this is a really good fic so please update soon. ;)

sorry if im being annoying, but to the author/-Nikikeya ^*~ teme just means "you!" but it's a really rude way of saying it, so it holds the same weight as an english "you bastard!" or something.

lol. the update was great. i love this story and want more updates! *demands*
however.. it sorta made me laugh when naruto almost died cause of a bowl of ramen. somebody could have accidentally pushed him or something.. that would have made things more dramatic for me.

i dont know.. i'm just weird. the whole slip on the noodles thing made me laugh and ruined the drama for me.. xD

update soon.. i love this story

Wow I really enjoyed this :D I wonder when you'll update this.....>>;;

Just please keep writing to it because I have fallen in love with it <3

-Courtney

Very nice so far but ano Teme means fuck you of fuck off Yaro means bastard kays

-Nikikeya ^*~

Ur fic is awsome. It's every original and ur writting is wonderful, I love the details. Now repeate these to yourself... "I MUST UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. I WILL NOT LET MY READERS DOWN."

YAAAAAAAY!! I LOVE YOU! i had been waiting so long for an update. whoo you scared me with that pottery shard in the skkull bit. lol how the fuck is that even possible?...ah well, if it is would definately happen to me or naruto. xD o.0; there's a scary thought seeing as i drop almost all the glasses in our house...anyways i've been waiting for this update for months. ^___^ great new years story.lol since its almost january. gtg...i have to actually sleep...its almost 3am here. love ya keep up the good work!*hug*

Hi, I'm glad you updated this and hope you do so again soon. I really enjoyed Gaara and Naruto's reaction to each other. Will you explain why Gaara dreams of Naruto, and the connection between them later on?

Heeeee~ Inclined to review just to thank you for continueing this fic! ^___^ I check on it now and again for updates so yeah happy to see you'r back again. Great story, though I felt this chappy had too much going on in such a small amount of time. ^_^ I did however love the whole Gaara-Sasuke, Naruto RAAAAAWR HE'S MIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE~ Possesiveness. ^^;! Would be cool to see more of it. xD Uhm yeah.... ^^ Keep up the great work! Up date soon ne! =D

Update please I'm begging You!!!! I can't stand the suspence...Though I have a gut feeling that she picked shikamaru....nnnoo my poor Ino...oh well it's not good for my health if I jump the gun like that. I love Garra But am a very firm supporter of SasuNaru. Aaww sasuke-kun is falling in love ^_^ Go Naruto!! all you have to do is keep on looking really cute and stay as far a way from Garra as possible and Sasuke will be aalll yours!! ^_^ Ja ne hopefully you'll update soon,ne?