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by Fairia13

person narutolemon
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, but some errors nonetheless. First of all, it is spelled Gaara, and he was a smidge OOC. But, like that matters, its a SakuGaara! My favorite. You should have put in a lemon in order for it to have recieved an R rating. Are you going to include another chapter? Very cool. <3