schedule
June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Steamy and very original. I really dug the Garden and the sex. The ending is sad, of course. If only they could stay together... Alas!
schedule
May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god! That was AMAZING above all words. So in character, and your reference to "The Garden of Eden"... Fan-Fucking-tastic! I swear, my second-favorite pairing done so well, damn. I cannot commend you enough for this, that is why you get a perfect score.
schedule
December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so awsomly aswome. OoO
schedule
February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hmph* I can't believe I hadn't reviewed it! x X;; Will you forgive meeh, Jo? I am teh horrible beta. So here I go:
So hot! I avoid OrochimaruAnko fics like the plague, but you made it so very sexy. *flails and threatens with roastings* Where's the rest of it? I demand more! More I say! *sporksporkspork*
But anyway, you know I love you. And I love this fic. It should spawn little ficlings, or something. *loves and pork roasts*
So hot! I avoid OrochimaruAnko fics like the plague, but you made it so very sexy. *flails and threatens with roastings* Where's the rest of it? I demand more! More I say! *sporksporkspork*
But anyway, you know I love you. And I love this fic. It should spawn little ficlings, or something. *loves and pork roasts*
schedule
February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very well written. Anko's hero-worship of Orochimaru and resulting bitterness come through cleanly and the whole Forbidden Fruit analogy was interesting and original.
schedule
January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. This writing is absolutely excellent.
From the symbolic dreams about the Garden of Eden, the references to nakedness--she was naked in the Garden in her dream, she likes to roam naked--these forms of innocence--and then are taken from her by Orochimaru---the thought that went into this is blatantly apparent. Your writing is fabulous to read. Hell, I'd read an extended version of Orochimaru and Anko. ^_^() --Although this story did not particularly need it. The focus was not on the sex...it was on Anko as a character.
Bravo!
From the symbolic dreams about the Garden of Eden, the references to nakedness--she was naked in the Garden in her dream, she likes to roam naked--these forms of innocence--and then are taken from her by Orochimaru---the thought that went into this is blatantly apparent. Your writing is fabulous to read. Hell, I'd read an extended version of Orochimaru and Anko. ^_^() --Although this story did not particularly need it. The focus was not on the sex...it was on Anko as a character.
Bravo!