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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. Its got some nice descriptions as to the feelings and thoughts going through naruto and Hinata's heads. Great character development with both of them and the storyline is just splendid. The plot is also intriguing as the story progresses with the new problems and solutions apearing and the events are well planned and thought out as well. None of the events seem rushed and neither are they dragged out. Great workk on it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up. hope its up soon.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story. For the love of all that is anything please update this sometime soon.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome it was abit harsh with the kyubbi thing but it was still hot please email me when u update my email is jmaxx112714@aol.com
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
Characters were pretty well kept in character, and you don't slop on the descriptions like a lot of people... ^_^
The only thing I would say to change is to make your chapters a little longer, or at least long enough that the end is more natural....
A cliffhanger here and there is OK, but it feels like the story keeps stopping-and-starting.....
Anyways, keep this up! I want to see some more from you!
Characters were pretty well kept in character, and you don't slop on the descriptions like a lot of people... ^_^
The only thing I would say to change is to make your chapters a little longer, or at least long enough that the end is more natural....
A cliffhanger here and there is OK, but it feels like the story keeps stopping-and-starting.....
Anyways, keep this up! I want to see some more from you!
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry i didnt review the other chapters once i start reading i dont stop. sorry again, this story is good iam still shocked that the demon comes out and does that but, i guess that to be excepted if you have a demon in you. anyway, like i said this was good...and update soon..and so on and so forth...bye
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey good story and a good start to it. I like the chapters after the beginning of the story but one question. Why was Kakashi and Kurenai hiding in the trees for. What will Naruto do when Kyuubi takes over again, and what will Hinata do when that happens again and I hope Naruto get control over the demon within him literally. keep up the writing
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story, plz update
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story I have read it atleast 4 times its like I cann`t get enough of it and I cann`t wait till it gets updated but I hate to say it but I have a feeling this story will never be updated again so I gess its time to look for better stories that wll get updated oh well keep up the good work
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was so happy when I finally found this story again but a little disappointed when I saw that it was not updated since the last time id read it. I really enjoy reading this story how you portrayed the relationship between naruto and the kyuubi and naruto Hinata. Well I did not see anywhere that you were going to update anytime soon but I sincerely hope you do, you know you are the one who go me into the paring of Naruto/Hinata in the first place.
PS got to love those lemons! Hahaha
PS got to love those lemons! Hahaha
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
k i dont usually make comments like this on storries but i just had to throw it in since it was a thought that came to my mind......... i dont think it needs to be considered a suggestion or anything but what if they (hinata and Naruto) could find a way to make the kyuubi less evil....... i just had to express my thoughts out loud since i hate not expressing them.................. it is a good story by the way :)