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awww so sweet :) I like where this is going ^_^

Iku, THANK YOU for fulling my dream of reading a Kyuubi x Hinata lemon. I REALLY REALLY LOVE YOU for this. Now don't have to destroy adultfanfiction.net with my pet horny panda Chin-Chin. THANK YOU!! ^___^

-Parapsychic Psycho

P.S.

I forgot to add that you still need to fix the paragraphs. It's hard for my eyes read it like that. Other than that, I WUV YOUR STORY!!

it was not the 3rd hokage that died sealing the kyuubi, it was the 4th hokage.

Thank you for your comments keeperofknowlege and Dementa, I have corrected the mistake of which Hokage did what.

Sorry about that, I have no beta readers, and rushed to finnish this chapter and proceed onto the next two. As well as work keeping me too busy to get much time to work on this story.

Awesome as usual! But one itty bitty thing irked me, it was the 4th hokage who defeated Kyuubi, the 3rd died while fighting Orochimaru when the chuunin exams were supposed to be taking place. That's all, I wanted to say, but other than that, I loved it! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter.

Poor Poor Naruto. I feel sorry for both af them that must have been very painful on both their parts. Well I'm enjoying your story very much it is nice. I hope that Hinata doesn't still feel like she can't go around him. That would be very painful. Well I'm enjoying your story and I hope you keep up the good work. Well Buh-Bye. :)

Really great, can't wait for more ^^

First prize goes to Katzztar who saw that it was a one-up on Naruto, in a "I pleased her and you failed" way, as well as to scare her off.

Also how would Kyuubi act in that situation?
Would he just want to kill some scared, weak, Hinata - my take on how he'd look at her as he hates humans and thinks their pathetic and pitiful.
Or
Would he want to satiate his lust and hurt the Naruto/Hinata relationship in one move - probably the more damaging and evil of the two, if not
in a violent way then at least on an emotional level.

You can see which one I picked as my theme.

There was also another reason - time and time again fanfics chuck everything into one scene and then all the sex scenes just seem to be a repeat.
Well by not doing everything possible I've left a lot to be used later on by either Naruto, Kyuubi or Hinata.

You're right,it could be a lot worse! Kyuubi seemed to just want to enjoy the sex and if it annoyed naruto then it's a plus for the demon. However if Kyuuki wanted to REALLY devaste thme he could have been a lot rougher, even slashing Hinata and killing her. Of course if he could have ran off too, but he didn't. He made sure Hinata got some pleaseure too, although it wasn't for her own sake.... more of the male ego thing, so he can say "I fucked her better than you' sort of thing