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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...O_O I mean, really. That was some chapter, and it was pretty good! The plot thickens even more, it's just so nail-biting. I can't wait for the next chapter, and yep, I had a feeling when I saw "Kyuubi" in the title and the codes at the bottom: DP, Anal *Nods* I had a feeling that was going to have a bit to do with the Kyuubi. But still a great chapter, great work and keep it up!
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yipe! That was so out there! Poor Hinata... poor Naruto! *cries* So... when are you going to update? ^_^
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for all your comments
The comment was made when chapter 5 was up, so I just wondered if I should really be putting the next few intensive scenes up, but as you can see, chapter 6 went up.
As for kyuubi being nice... Isn't he a demon?
Read the disclaimer at the bottom of chapter 7 for why it goes the way it does, but who knows, maybe my title 'sweet kyuubi' hinted at him slowly being tamed by Hinata?
You'll have to wait and find out.
The comment was made when chapter 5 was up, so I just wondered if I should really be putting the next few intensive scenes up, but as you can see, chapter 6 went up.
As for kyuubi being nice... Isn't he a demon?
Read the disclaimer at the bottom of chapter 7 for why it goes the way it does, but who knows, maybe my title 'sweet kyuubi' hinted at him slowly being tamed by Hinata?
You'll have to wait and find out.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice really like how you set things up. Your a very talented writer. I look forward to more fics from you and more to this story :)
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, nice chapter! Can't wait for the next :D:D:D
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God... Kyuubi's going to hurt Hinata? Noooooo!! Wait... *reads codes in summary* D.P, Anal? <<; Eh... ooh... poor Hinata... can't wait!!
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUACK!!! Kyuubi's going to hurt Hinata!? Or... is he just going to be super rough...? Either way, can't wait! Your stuff is awesome!
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, why do I have the feeling that Kyuubi is going to take over and give her some more fun??? I hope by the title ..my Sweet Kyuubi... means he's not going to be visious with Hinata but actually (sorata) loving with her.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should keep going, I enjoy reading this for one. And the only thing "wrong" with this fic is that the two characters are underaged. And underaged sex is not really uncommon, so.... keep on trucking :3
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah you should continue it its a good story, dont let the reviews get to you