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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm so loving this story! I hope naruto isn't going to beat himself up too much, after all if Hinata was happy (and so would I have been if I were her! Their night was so sweet) why should he worry? Still it makes me all the more impatient to find out what happens. Love this! XD XD XD
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't listen to thoughs people, I think you should continue the story and end it in the way you see fit.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling the Kyuubi parts are gonna be my favourites.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A really great story so far! Should work on editing the paragraphs though... Keep up the good work! :)
-Parapsychic Psycho
-Parapsychic Psycho
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh jeez... tell me Kyuubi's not going to come out now... That would suck bad... for Naruto at least... Hinata on the other hand... Oh! I have such a dirty mind... But anyway, that was good! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay there seems to be some sort of confusion here, I've just deleted a review saying something along the lines of "WTF they're only 13, they shouldn't think about sex so much"
Well firstly this is an ADULT-fanfiction site, so what do you expect to find on it, Secondly the characters in Naruto are young, but if that really worries you you can pretend they're older, and if thats still not pure enough for you then don't read this story. I don't need comments telling me their age, and saying that it's wrong it's a fiticous fanfiction on a fictitious story. Did i mention it's fictitious?
As for being 13 and not thinking of sex, I think you'll find boys discover an interest in girls a lot younger sometimes, ever hear of 'young love'? If not then why does the news have stories of children running off together as young as 12 because they love each other and hate the fact that their parents don't understand?
Also, have you looked at the other Naruto stories on here? It's all pretty much the same Naruto characters they are using!
However, if this is truly how you all feel then I will stop and not put up any more, or anything of an adult nature/situation.
As Such:
Naruto and Hinata get rescued by Kakashi before anything more can happen - THE END!
Happy?
If not let me know if you want me to continue this story properly or not - just post a review saying your opinion and reasons, if you want it removed when this matter is resolved simply put a '[del]' at the end of your review. I have the next chapter finished but am quite happy to post them on my own site if no one wants them on here.
Well firstly this is an ADULT-fanfiction site, so what do you expect to find on it, Secondly the characters in Naruto are young, but if that really worries you you can pretend they're older, and if thats still not pure enough for you then don't read this story. I don't need comments telling me their age, and saying that it's wrong it's a fiticous fanfiction on a fictitious story. Did i mention it's fictitious?
As for being 13 and not thinking of sex, I think you'll find boys discover an interest in girls a lot younger sometimes, ever hear of 'young love'? If not then why does the news have stories of children running off together as young as 12 because they love each other and hate the fact that their parents don't understand?
Also, have you looked at the other Naruto stories on here? It's all pretty much the same Naruto characters they are using!
However, if this is truly how you all feel then I will stop and not put up any more, or anything of an adult nature/situation.
As Such:
Naruto and Hinata get rescued by Kakashi before anything more can happen - THE END!
Happy?
If not let me know if you want me to continue this story properly or not - just post a review saying your opinion and reasons, if you want it removed when this matter is resolved simply put a '[del]' at the end of your review. I have the next chapter finished but am quite happy to post them on my own site if no one wants them on here.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't you DARE dropping this.... it was just beginning to get interesting XD
So... if you drop this... I'll come back to haunt you! :) Just kidding.... but please continue! Don't let them idiots get to ya... ^-^
So... if you drop this... I'll come back to haunt you! :) Just kidding.... but please continue! Don't let them idiots get to ya... ^-^
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you ignore those pinworms (intestinal parasites) that are giving you a hard time. It's your story and you write what you want to write. Don't let those morons get you down. It's a great story and should be continued. If they can't handle underaged sex, they can click a back button and go read some thing were everyone's 18+ And half the people who are reading this are probably underage themselves. Just ignore them, no matter how good a story is you will always have flamers, haters and whiners. As long as it's not violating the rules of the site, people should keep their trap shut. Okay, rant over with now. And I just have to say one last thing. Your last chapter... Was teh awesomeness! Can't wait for Kyuubi appearance! ^_^ *snaps fingers and has Gaara sand coffin all of your flamers and haters* Bye bye! Till next time
Sizzle
Sizzle
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue the story and don't pay attention to those idiotic retards that can't understand the meaning of fiction.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!! FORGET THAT BLOCK-HEAD.