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awww man. Discontinuing it before you ever got to any NaruHina action that's so sad... This was one of the few sasusaku fanfics I've liked (I'm not really fond of Sasuke or Sakura to be honest) and defininitly the only good lemon. You've got great characterization, prose, description... *sigh* RIP awesome fanfic. RIP...

0_o Cute........
Sasuke is like the real thing.
And Sakura finally showed her real her.
Getting angry at Sasuke........so fun.
Finally she amazed him instead he her ^^
Update soon

Gasppp! I am loving this. It's actually got a... (dun dun dun) PLOT! Not just sex. And the plot isn't even really centered around sex. It's just there to make things fun. Mhm. I approve very muchly. Yay for approval. Or something.

Although. Why is it that every time I start to really like a fic, and really want to finish it etc., I get to the last chapter, finish it, and discover that it's not _really_ the last chapter and I have to waitttt? Well. Quite often. But I am eagerly awaiting your update and I cannot wait to read more!

And I adore how you've gotten Naruto and Hinata to come along, and how it is looking like the beginning of a couple (at least to me ^-^, but I'm not the author, so I'm just guessing.), Hinata is such an adorable character. Shr does seem a bit OOC though. A little too much on the mean-side. But not in a big, flashy way or anything. Certainly, nothing I'd entirely stop reading the fic over.

Well. As I said, I'll be (not-so-) patiently waiting for the next installment. Keep up the good work and best of luck!<3

I really do love this story. It's very well written!

...Dude, I mean, it was fine at first (because I'm a geek for SasuSaku) but...they're 13. And dragging Naruto and Hinata along without Shikamaru doing a thing? Eeeep. Just...I liked the story. But that's dragging it past the boundaries of believability, man.

Many an evil plan, eh? I'd like to see that. Write some Sasuke/Sakura hawtness in the next chapter. XD I Love your story, keep going.

<3~ Finality.

There's no new chapter. The story stops at the same point it did the last time I read it.

Ahhh... No updates for forever, please don't let this story die an early death!!!!

I just found this story and read all the available chapters at once. I must say that I do so like the way the pairings are set up. However I find both the pairings and the way that the "revenge crew" got formed to be a little too convenient. Sakura broke down Sasuke's emotional walls ridiculously easily and they moved from first kiss to.... a lot more.... rather quickly. Also, Naruto and Hinata seemed all too eager to throw away everything for a quest that has nothing to do with them.
I hope I have provided useful insight.

Uh huh. Definately continue, ne? Luv it!