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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All in all, an excellant story so far. At some points, things became slightly random, but you managed to iron them out quite nicely. I am very impressed. I look forward to coming chapters.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where are you?I miss your take on s and S.It is the first story of its kind I have been able to read at all.Please come back!
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW you wrote an amazing fanfic for someone who hates sasu/saku pairing keep up the good (wait did i just say good) screw that i meant great story every time i look up naruto fics and find that this fic has beed updated i get excited and look forward to rewading the rest of the story so pls pls pls update soon i look forward to the next chapter
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read this again. I loved it! Update soon!
-Chelsey-
-Chelsey-
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good installment. Update soon!
-Chelsey-
-Chelsey-
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well,Sakura really is getting her way.Far out,she is working for it.Wonder what the hell Itachi is gonna do seeing this crazy crew on his tail.corrupt them all?Kill em?Expose his unexpected master plan for world peace,move to a different continent?It is nice to hear/see(?) Sasuke sqirm I must say.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It got really good up until the naru/hina part
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing. I love Naruto, his brooding is so different. It tore at me...but I love how you've captured him in sadness so well. It hurts me to see him and Hinata liek this. I hope everythign works out for the better. He deserves someoen right now. Love the chapter.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shikamaru's easy? I can't write him at all~ and I'm a bum. Poor Hinata ;.;. Cute SasuSaku though :3.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I liked the way you handled Naruto and Hinata, although their chat was somewhat weird. Still, I agree Naruto has to deal with getting over Sakura for a bit more time before he can open his heart to Hinata. Thanks for not just throwing them together. And I also like the way Sakura and Sasuke are introducing sex in their relationship beginning with caresses, handjobs and other little things.