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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, this is interesting. It's kinda weird he let all 3 come with him, as well as Shikamaru and Neji just letting them go. They're pretty loyal after all. Maybe even with 4 v 2 odds. New chappie was yummy, can't wait for more ^^
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not dead! I'm not dead!!!!!! I've been very busy, but I'm back! Please update soon, this is getting good. What about Sakura paying Sasuke back.........? ;)
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, this is good. I'm glad your Sakura has a spine. ^_^ And despite their ages and whatnot, I'm hoping for a lemon between them... >.> <.<
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this whole piece is fabulous. Yeah--Sasuke let Sakura in--and while that may never really happen, this is fanfiction. ^_^ I really enjoy this. I want you to continue it!
And Shikamaru was so believeable. ^_^ "Too troublesome. We can't take on four guys."
It's great. Keep writing.
And Shikamaru was so believeable. ^_^ "Too troublesome. We can't take on four guys."
It's great. Keep writing.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Drooling on her leg? ...cute in a disgusting way XD...
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was gone for a couple of days and you got three new chapters up! Awsome! I'm loving this fic so far and I think that for once this Sazu and Saku pasiring is really good. AND I'm so happy that you brought Hinta along I think Narturo deserves a love intrest too, he's such a sweet heart. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chap!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the small talk that Naruto had with Sakura AND Sasuke. It made my heart go out to him. He's just so wonderful. I think he deserves Sakura and Hinata just as well. But since Hinata happens to be one of my favorite characters I can't do that to her. She deserves Naruto more than anyone else. Lovely chapter.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...YAY! They all joined :D. ...8can't believe she's reading hetero fic* Not that het's bad, 'cause it's not, I'm just usually more of a gay gal ^^;...and SasuSaku...is odd. But I like the way you write it. Hinata is cool here :D.
Sorry if anything in that up there offended, wasn't meant to. Just moi thinking aloud :P.
Sorry if anything in that up there offended, wasn't meant to. Just moi thinking aloud :P.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. The only difficult thing to buy was Naruto's 180º turn in his intentions, going from pounding Sasuke to join him in his exile. I'd love to see the looks on Tsunade, Jiraiya, and Hiashi's faces when Shikamaru reports what happened.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An amazing chapter. I was starting to fret when Sakura said that only she and Sasuke were a team, because that meant leaving Naruto out and truth be told, I would never read a story that left out Naruto. But I'm glad you decided to include him in the team. ^^