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for Hiasobi

by dragonflyelj

person kakashis_girl
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! I just started reading fics on this site and this one is already my fave! I hope you update!
person allyluv17
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD!!! *squealing like a fan girl* this is TOOO good!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! even though i'm 100% sure it'll be worth the wait. AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person saria
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read a few ItaSaku fics, but this one is the most believable, by FAR. You have kept everyone perfectly in character, and your spelling, grammar, and wording is very addicting. Finding this at 2 in the moring and completing reading the entire thing is a feat in itself, so I really do applaud you! I'm REALLY looking forward to the lemon, and the next chapter. I don't exactly expect a lemon so soon, but I love the story either which way. Great job, keep up the WONDERFUL job, and as always, update SOON! I'll be checking up on it. ^_^
person Nova Alexandria
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea. I look forward to seeing more. I think, thus far, everyone is reasonably in charactor, taking time and experiances into account. I can't wait for the next chapter. Youa re a very tallented writer.
person animevivverz
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love where this story is going. You portrayed Sakura very well after chapter 246. Everyone seems to be like they should be. You don't get much of ItaSaku stories around her, much less well written ones as this. Great job!
person flyingwind
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
itasaku community??? O.O where where??? send me email with the address XD I wanna join!
person saara
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!! that is all i would like to say.... this fic is by FAR the BEST itasaku fic i have EVER read!!!! you have done such a great job..normally in this pairing itachi-san's character is screwed up... you have managed to keep him exactly in character and all of his reactions and conversations are more or less exactly what he would say...i am soooo happy!! It was really nice reading this fic and so worthwhile.. ^_^ I hope and pray that you would continue this fic in the same manner that you have started and though i am happy that you are taking your time with it to make it just perfect....i impatiently will await the next chapter...please update soon,k?? i will try to be more patient though...lol... ^_^ graet job BYE !!
person Chelsey
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really happy with how you wrote this. I am sad to know that it will take a month for the next installment, I do however understand the need to not rush it. If you do have the need for a bata reader I'll be happy to help. Please email me and let me know. And do update your story as soon as you can! I'm really enjoying it.
I do have a few stories of my own if you want to check them out, they're not as good as yours I'm afraid, I lack patience. But if you feel like reading them my pen-name is HisBeautiful.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person nuri_chanka
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!! :D Great fic and I can't wait to read more!
person Silverwing
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! Finally a new Itachi/Sakura fic! There's not enough of them out there and they're my favourite couple! Great job dude! Continue! ASAP!