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by persepolis130

person Sizzle
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God! That is so freaking crazy! I loved it! You totally rock! I can't wait for more of this!
person Kira-chan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is really good. I can't wait to read more. I really want to know what becomes of this mean, mean twist of fate, the sister thing. Boo. I did not see that coming, which is good because being too predictable is boring. Wow and that Temari thing was out of the blue also.

I read "Waiting is the Hardest Thing", but I didn't review it, I will if you like, but I just decided I may as well just talk about it here. Except I have nothing to say except that it was good. Hrm. I haven't read anything else with her in it, so I haven't really ever thought of who to pair her with. Shikamaru, eh? I always sort of imagined him with Ino, but all's fair in love and war. And fanfiction.

Or something.

ANYWAYS. Can't wait until you update, best of luck<3.
person Celira
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...dude.

At risk of sounding like a flatly stupid fangirl, update? The NejiHina fan in me is about to pass out, and you've written this all...fairly...well. :D
person xixixi
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update! update!
person nejixhiashi maniac
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more hiashi and neji....
MORE LEMON! MORE DETAILS! MORE! MORE! HAHAHAHA!!
please recommend me any strory you know about this couple...
I NEED IT. seriously...
person Alex
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, but I think its almost getting to be TOO much lime. O_o; Never thought I'd say THAT.

I love how you write Gai.
person Orochi
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D: noooo! hurry and write the next one! I have always adored Hinata, she's one of my fave anime characters ever, and I used to loathe neji for how cruel he was towards her. But now I feel so bad for Neji ): And I'm starting to understand him a little better...I hope things work out for him... although it might be more interesting if they didn't >.>
person Koneko
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this on fanfiction.net and like so wanted to review it! I adore this story, in fact, when I was in my other home when I moved, I use to read like 6 chapters before going to bed and anticipating what would come next!
You got an awesome dirty side of the story for the Hyuuga! 3 cheers to you!
person Azuya-Owh
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love ya!! love your story!! love the hinata/neji parts! hope you'll write more of them.. i kinda feel sorry for tenten but she's one of my least fav character.. oh well.. your fic ROCKS! though it is very dark, angsty, and a little bit twisted (the hiashi/neji part).. but nonetheless it's a very good fic..
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jaw hangs open*

Wow... I absolutely loved it. Your characterazations, your plot, your writing style... all amazing.

The only scene I think could forsee being wonderful that you didn't write would be Neji appologzing to Tenten for his outburst. I'd be kinda fun to see Neji struggling to appologize.

*much hearts*