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for Favorite Sin

by Saro

person eta_carinae
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was so hot! I loved how the ending was so sweet, how sasuke was a little jealous, and a naughty naruto! =)
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was...unbelievably hot. I haven't been able to stand yaoi for a while now, but curiosity won out. I'm glad I don't blush easily, but I think this cleared my sinuses.

I wish I could write a story that was at least half as hot as this. This was amazing to read.
person Eye of Aurora
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew...I had to turn the heat down in my apartment. That was fantastically dirty and gritty and hot as all immaculate hell. I loved it. It was beautifully written with that dark sort of edge...and totally arousing. My life is made better by each great Naruto Yaoi lemon out there, so you just made my day/week/month. This is great. I hope you continue to write more smutty fics...I love the way you describe the characters...their bodies and their noises and expressions and whatnot. It's wonderful. Amazing job. This is one of my favorites. ^_^
person ally2002
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh come on write a sequel!!! that 's was soo good!!

person clowangel
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. That was HOT! O_O *drools* Neji-sama neji-sama.. I can just imagine him in all his naked glory. ^^ Someone has to do a fanart for this!
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
! <3
person Monkey Lady
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! That was awesome! I'm actually blushing! That story just made my day. I have to go see if you've written other stuff now! Yeah!!!
person Kashshaptu
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*speechless*

this is so good! write more of these!

thank you!^_^
person Natakamani
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grr. Just grr. Very hot.... Perhaps a bit OOC, but not enough to detract from the pure sexyness involved. You did an excellent job, congrats! And please, write more!

Much luv,
Natakamani
person Bealmira
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Fuck. Or unholy, I suppose... That was... amazing. You're sooo good at this. I love you! *hugs* Gahhh.... I can't even think of what to type here. Speachless, I am. Damn... You're good. So fucking good. Yeah...