rate_review Reviews

Amazing and brilliant. O.O

Seriously.

Wow.

Well-written (which is VERY hard to find), and very hot, with all my favorite aspects of yaoi!

i love shika! he reminds me so much of myself, even in this fic! haha! i loved this fic. i'd hook up with him. haha!

Dude--awesome idea! It would explain why Shika is always so quiet and stares at the clouds all the time, he's actually thinking of other things... = ) This was a good exscues to have your wicked way with all the characters. Hehe. I'm a major Rock Lee fan btw, and you had some interesting ideas that made me think... Anyhoo--it would be wonderful if Shika actually had a chance to make some of his daydreems come true in future chapers *hint hint*

Great..xD So descriptive, I've always pictured Shikamaru as freak but this is a new level of freakiness. <3

well that was something else it was really hot i LOVE shikamaru !!!!!!!!!!! Good job :) :):):)

I agree with your little note at the end. SasuNaru is indeed hot, and so is Kiba, strangely enough (though he hooked me with his agressive persona back in the chuunin exam^_^But I do love him without the hood!) I kinda like the side of Shikamaru you show. It's a little exaggerated, but it wouldnt really surprise me if he was a little kinky on the inside. THe only thing I didnt like bout your story was the KakaSaku implications (Sorry, I'm a KakaIru fan~_*). I can't stand the couple, but since you didnt go into detail I'm all good!! You write first person very well! Keep up the good work!!!!

Oooooooo....who would've guessed Shika such a pervy one behind that lazy attitude of his. Luv the story. Interesting but in a weird kind of way. ^ ^

OMFG! I absolutely love this fic! The idea of Shika being a pervert is so.....hot! I like the whole his POV idea, very original to do it in this style, at least I think so. I was drooling before reading this. I absolutely love Shikamaru and would rape him if he was real. Though, this version of Shika, I wouldn't have to now would I? *winks* Keep writing about Shika's hidden pervertedness!!!!!

Wow, that was... amazing! Imagining Shikamaru as such a devious and calculating sexual being gives me the shivers. This is definately the best bit of solo fiction I have ever read.

Wow. Now, that was pleasing...It was completely orginal and written beautifully, I loved it! While reading this I noticed that you really got inside Shikamaru's head and brought the character to life by using certain prases and such. Good job, very well done!

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