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by EyeofAurora

person yagi-san
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....wow.... more and more, be it in fic or actual story, I find more ways that me and Shikamaru are so alike... it's kinda scary, actually... o.O;; XD Seriously, he's about as pervy as I am... maybe more! XD Anyway, toatlly awsome fic! YAY for Shika yaoi! *dances*
person Aozora
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigod omigod *faints from blood loss* that was fucking amazing! haha i love this Shikamaru XD i can completely see him being all pervy and voeyer-esque haha absolutely fantastic! who wouldn't love this? =P great job man! i'd love to see more Naruto fanfics by you! if you do a yaoi fic i'd suggest SasuNaru of course and then maybe Kakashi x Iruka. or even InoxSakura (yeah i kno not yaoi but yuri hey i'll read either). hehe can't wait for you to write another fic!! please dooooooooooooooooo and quickly! =P
~Aoi
person Erika
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really hard for me to picture Shikamaru like that but awe heck that was AWESOME:D
person kai
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was...awesome! great pov fic!! you put shika with everyone, technically!! ^^||
person Sasori Kym
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. Fucking. GOD. I have rarely read anything that rivals how hot this story was! I'm bloody AMAZED! You did a most fantastic job and I reeeeeeally hope to see much more from you. In fact, I'll cry if I don't. You don't want that, do you?
person Jormungandr
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This. Was. Just. BLOODY AWESOME. XDDD

"Naruto smells utterly like a boy; ramen and soap and musty clothing.

Very good.

Oh, what a naughty little voyeur I am.

I should be spanked.

Oh! That brings me to an even more exciting subject. Punishment! Bondage! How captivating.

Only two people come to mind when I think of such things.

Shino and Rock Lee."

That part KILLED ME. For I am an obsessive Lee fangirl. XD I was literally laughing so hard I cried.

Great writing. Very Shika, in a disturbing way. Now we know why he's so... eh. Although ShikaSasu might be weird. "Hm." "Bothersome." "Get the lube?" "Nah. Too much hassle." "Hm." "Fuck this."

Thank you forever. XD
person Nezuko
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What deliciously descriptive detail! Who cares if it's OOC? I loved it.
person Tremalkinger
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too much? No... hehe... I honestly think you have our beloved Shikamaru's personality perfectly distilled into the written word.

He could be paired up with anyone from the entire series and love it (except for Ino... she's much too troublesome). Males more likely, as you pointed out.

I absolutely love Shikamaru... thank you for giving me a wonderful little portal into his thoughts.

P.S. Write more *g*
person JJ
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*___* unbelievably hot! I love Shika ^_^
person Rinpu
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I love all the hot mental images... ^^