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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fanfic!!!! you gotta update soon!! gives us the teaser then LEAVES!! that's really realllllly cruel! the plot is really good right now and i guess the whole sasunaru thing's gonna take some time since they just seem like pretty close buddies..not yaoish yet...btw, will there be any other pairings? can't wait till you update!
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start i really hope that you continue it i just can't wait to see what will happen next!!!!
UNTIL NEXT CHAPTER SEE YOU.BYE BYE
P.S update soon okay.
UNTIL NEXT CHAPTER SEE YOU.BYE BYE
P.S update soon okay.
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you everyone for the reviews ^_^ I really appreciate the advice and comments. I know that Chapter 2 seems a little rushed and I am hoping to answer all of the questions as soon as I can...Chapter 3 is in the works right now and is already focusing on the "cave" and the jutsu behind that (I am actually almost finished with it...). I will touch more on the Kyuubi/Naruto situation later on plus I'll reveal the "bringing back of the Uchiha" scenario. ^_^
Thanks again for the support ^_^
Thanks again for the support ^_^
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful
now update
now update
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Your interpretation of Naruto's powers is different. Naruto has a bit more control over Kyuubi's powers than that right now in the manga. It would only increase with time. He's been able to use Kyuubi's powers multiple times without losing control.
One more thing. In canon Naruto is now 14-15. So this is technically 2-3 years in the future. That reminds me that I have to change my own description of my fic.
Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Your interpretation of Naruto's powers is different. Naruto has a bit more control over Kyuubi's powers than that right now in the manga. It would only increase with time. He's been able to use Kyuubi's powers multiple times without losing control.
One more thing. In canon Naruto is now 14-15. So this is technically 2-3 years in the future. That reminds me that I have to change my own description of my fic.
Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you definitely have my attention. Please continue.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very nice start! It's shaping up to be a great story, I think. :) I look forward to Chapters 3 and beyond.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh not bad, hope to see more too, and more info on those bars that is holding everone in there, and why don't they just bread down the cave walls, or use that earth element ninjutisu to go threw them?? i see a few loop holes and it could you a little more detail in the peoples interaction, but other then that i give it a 8 out of 10, very good work!