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i'm loving this story! please update soon. (and i really wanna get to some naruto and sasuke loving!!!!) =)

Great story! I want More! Update! Update!

Risa: Yay another chap!! I love the chapters and I never noticed a spelling error...
Katana: *decides to keep quite about how she didn't notice any spelling errors...* I noticed no errors either...
Risa: *raises an eyebrow at Katana* Don't worry... He's always a big meanie!
Katana: *blinks at her and then shruggs* whatever... I also enjoyed your story...so far. The touch of light in the darkness of the story calls out to many an audiance... Please do continue with this... intresting development...
Risa: THAT'S THE MOST HE'S SAID IN A DECADE!!
Katana: *right eye twitches* I bid you farwell until the next chapter...
Risa: BYE!!!!

OOOOMMMMMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like...cried over this chapter...wow...I haven't read the previous chapters for some time and so I reread the whole thing, and just...the build up was incredible and by the time I got to the end of this chapter...I was in tears. heh. Maybe I'm just pathetic like that, but wow...wow..heh. I can't say much more. Just wow. I would proofread (or do you people call it beta?) your chapters for you before you post them, if you like. Me likes grammar! lol. And of course that is horrible grammar, but seriously, rest assured that I am at least somewhat strong in grammar and spelling and would be perfetly willing to edit for you. (willing!?!? are you KIDDING ME!! PLEASE!!!! *beggle* PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!! lol) My email is posted along with this review anyhow, so just shoot me an email if you like. (heehee ^^;; also, another plus side to the editing: I get to see the chapters before other people heeheehee!!) There aren't ANY ulterior motives at ALL!! *looks innocent* lol. But yeah...awesome fic. Awesome chapter. Just WOW!! hehehe. I hope you consider my offer! ^.~

Oh. My God. I.....ummmmm.......well, that is......I........... (wait for it, wait for it.........) OMG, I L-O-V-E LOVE this fic!!!! (told ya *smirk*) Gah!!! It's just sooooooo amazing!!! *spazzes* ^^ No, really, this is a great idea, and I just -adore- your writting style!!! The details and descriptions are great!!! And the characters.....yup, they rock, too!!! The only problem is your spelling, lol. ^___~ I can't -wait- to find out what happens next!!! So keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!

I'll be honest, This is the first suicide fan fic that Ive read and actually enjoyed. xD Last chapter wsn't bad at all ^^ It was good to see Sasuke struggle with his own thoughts whether he still helt a caring side or not. Not alot of people write about that struggle... Which makes your fan fic pretty rare ^^ Anyhow, I hope you continue this story. I'm here to support ya on it completely. xP

Update soon!!!! you have me addicted to your fic!!!

that was not horrible! that was amazing! amazing! i love you forever for it! *glomps* this chapter was very... sweet! i liked it a lot! i hope get the chance to update again soon!

I rather liked this chapter. Yeah, Sasuke was a bit out of character, but it is needed and I like the way he was out of character. I hope you won't take as long as last time to update again =). Goodluck and I hope you get helpful feedback-not that mine is going to be anything other then a confidence booster.

aww, darn. Naruto sounds so broken. And Sasuke, he sounds believable I guess. Update soon.