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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....>_< Cliffiness is my ENEMY!!! I love this story, but it's so sad! I need to find out what happens! Write more soon, okay? ^_^
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! i love it! update fast!
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. You are right-there are lots of spelling errors. Not that you spelled the words wrong just spelt the wrong words, like feel instead of fell and a few others. It's ok though, your meaning still came through. Well I hope you find the energy to continue this story because I think many people will enjoy it, including me.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like that. I can't wait to see what you can di when you truely get into the character interaction. Nice job!!!
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great start so please continue this story or i'll cry a river longer than the longest river in history okay
*sobs* *sniff*
update really soon i mean really soon in like the next second.
until next time BYE BYE!!
*sobs* *sniff*
update really soon i mean really soon in like the next second.
until next time BYE BYE!!
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fic! I really liked it and I'm looking forward to more of it... So don't stop, and ganbatte! ^^
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I like the emotion. Very nice job. Please continue.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...niceeeeee fic, Dark, yeah, but put together really well. It's good, please update soon. This is a great story so far, and I want to see if it WAS Kyuubi who was yelling at Naruto...or was he just hearing Sasuke? Hmmm...*ponderance* Well, we shall see! ^_^
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update this wonderful story when you can.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHHH TT-TT naruchan is alive but doesnt want sasuchan to care even though he does..... how sad.... great chappy cant wait for next one!!!! ^o^