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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 review, ouch is an understatement, damn that had to hurt, poor Naruto, Sakura's got to feel like shit about that as well. I love this story more and more as I read it.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah, that was damn . . . I loved it. The ending certainly makes me wonder about what's going to happen now. Poor Kiba ahahahahaha, Sasuke laughing about it, that's something else, I love it when Sasuke laughs just because its rare and it has a tendancy to piss Naruto off. ANBU, huh, well good luck to them but I can't wait to find out what the mission is.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha, he finally snaps, so very good, it was brilliant, staying in character for everyone even when Sasuke gets fed up and explodes. I loved it, my only complaint was that Sakura doesn't remain that annoying around Sasuke as the years go by. But the story is great, can't wait to read more and seeing as how Sakura can just be as you write her because my interest is with Naruto and Sasuke anyway I'll live with how you write her to be.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope you add more to this great story! I would really like to see how Sakura reacts to Naruto now that see knows and I wanna see Sasuke do the math as well!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow......You left us in a bit of a cliffhanger eh? I'm really liking this on where it's going. I really hope you will continue this fic. It's absolutely wonderful! Will be waiting here patiently. Keep up the great work! :DDD
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really enjoy this story. The storyline is pretty interesting. I'd like to know where its going and wanted to know if you planned on finishing or if there is a finished version out there? Thanks
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yah! i really loved it! the plot! the sex ! the drama ! more please another chapter!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, how did i happen to miss this fic for so long..:D I really liked that Sasuke finally said what was on his mind to Sakura (though that was kind of harsh, but still...) and who would've thought that I could actually read NaruSaku, even this little..i usually hate that pairing to the end but maybe knowing that this still is SasuNaru helped me.. ;P arrgh! but Kashi and Sasuke?? What was that all about? Does this still continue cause I have lots of questions that needs answer..especially that when Sasuke thought that 'It never was enough…' did he refer that he did it (or something, I don't know and can't think xD) with Kakashi because he thought that Naruto would never be willing..? (at least this is what my mind makes me think.. xD)
And what happens in the end??? Are Sasuke and Naruto now together or what? Never thought that I would actually Want 'the infamous' after talk to the end but those talks usually answer most of my questions.. (doesn't still mean I like them, cause too many authors ruins them with these stupid, 'I've always loved you' things which -by the way xD - I hate to death)
..sigh...somehow I feel I'm not making any sense here...sorry.. ;P
And what happens in the end??? Are Sasuke and Naruto now together or what? Never thought that I would actually Want 'the infamous' after talk to the end but those talks usually answer most of my questions.. (doesn't still mean I like them, cause too many authors ruins them with these stupid, 'I've always loved you' things which -by the way xD - I hate to death)
..sigh...somehow I feel I'm not making any sense here...sorry.. ;P
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you started the story--it flows very well. (Heehee, Lee's supposed "birthday gift" was awesome. Go SakuLee!) And your characterization is _great_ (their reactions are excellent at every turn), almost in-character, if my fangirlishness isn't clouding my judgment...too much... ^_^;;
The NaruSaku scene is harsh and probably terrifyingly close to the truth, if it were to ever happen. Poor, dumb, narrow-minded girl. (:shakes head sadly) But it was sweet and endearing while it lasted, and I'm glad that you acknowledged it could happen especially with his new look (which should be canon, btw! ;D). Oh, but the smut scene is awesome. Don't ever consider changing it! =) (Thank you for the sex scene, btw! It was droolworthy! ^_^)
And this is one of my favorite lines/scenes:
“You’re a hard person to care about, you really are.”
“Don’t you ever wonder if it’s really worth it sometimes?”
“No.”
^_^ <3
It's just so like Naruto, to not even question that he'd care, yet unable to say exactly why he would. And then deny it completely. :D And then there was the moment for Sasuke when he rushed over to our dear blond's apartment after his nightmare...awwww, brotherly love...They're so sweet!
Okay, I could list off all my favorite scenes but that would take forever and _a lot_ of space, so I'll stop here.
But I can't wait to see how this turns out. In your summary you mention that Naruto runs away, and I hope you follow through with it because it really is an interesting idea. And then we've got the Jounin teachers discussing some sort of assignment/mission for a bunch of them...I can't believe you left it on such a note! I hope you haven't given up on this fic. Looking forward to the next update!
(Chapter 3)
The NaruSaku scene is harsh and probably terrifyingly close to the truth, if it were to ever happen. Poor, dumb, narrow-minded girl. (:shakes head sadly) But it was sweet and endearing while it lasted, and I'm glad that you acknowledged it could happen especially with his new look (which should be canon, btw! ;D). Oh, but the smut scene is awesome. Don't ever consider changing it! =) (Thank you for the sex scene, btw! It was droolworthy! ^_^)
And this is one of my favorite lines/scenes:
“You’re a hard person to care about, you really are.”
“Don’t you ever wonder if it’s really worth it sometimes?”
“No.”
^_^ <3
It's just so like Naruto, to not even question that he'd care, yet unable to say exactly why he would. And then deny it completely. :D And then there was the moment for Sasuke when he rushed over to our dear blond's apartment after his nightmare...awwww, brotherly love...They're so sweet!
Okay, I could list off all my favorite scenes but that would take forever and _a lot_ of space, so I'll stop here.
But I can't wait to see how this turns out. In your summary you mention that Naruto runs away, and I hope you follow through with it because it really is an interesting idea. And then we've got the Jounin teachers discussing some sort of assignment/mission for a bunch of them...I can't believe you left it on such a note! I hope you haven't given up on this fic. Looking forward to the next update!
(Chapter 3)
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you started the story--it flows very well. (Heehee, Lee's supposed "birthday gift" was awesome. Go SakuLee!) And your characterization is _great_ (their reactions are excellent at every turn), almost in-character, if my fangirlishness isn't clouding my judgment...too much... ^_^;;
The NaruSaku scene is harsh and probably terrifyingly close to the truth, if it were to ever happen. Poor, dumb, narrow-minded girl. (:shakes head sadly) But it was sweet and endearing while it lasted, and I'm glad that you acknowledged it could happen especially with his new look (which should be canon, btw! ;D). Oh, but the smut scene is awesome. Don't ever consider changing it! =) (Thank you for the sex scene, btw! It was droolworthy! ^_^)
And this is one of my favorite lines/scenes:
“You’re a hard person to care about, you really are.”
“Don’t you ever wonder if it’s really worth it sometimes?”
“No.”
^_^ (<3) [My review got cut off right here so I'm hopefully reposting it...]
It's just so like Naruto, to not even question that he'd care, yet unable to say exactly why he would. And then deny it completely. :D And then there was the moment for Sasuke when he rushed over to our dear blond's apartment after his nightmare...awwww, brotherly love...They're so sweet!
Okay, I could list off all my favorite scenes but that would take forever and _a lot_ of space, so I'll stop here.
But I can't wait to see how this turns out. In your summary you mention that Naruto runs away, and I hope you follow through with it because it really is an interesting idea. And then we've got the Jounin teachers discussing some sort of assignment/mission for a bunch of them...I can't believe you left it on such a note! I hope you haven't given up on this fic. Looking forward to the next update!
(Chapter 3)
The NaruSaku scene is harsh and probably terrifyingly close to the truth, if it were to ever happen. Poor, dumb, narrow-minded girl. (:shakes head sadly) But it was sweet and endearing while it lasted, and I'm glad that you acknowledged it could happen especially with his new look (which should be canon, btw! ;D). Oh, but the smut scene is awesome. Don't ever consider changing it! =) (Thank you for the sex scene, btw! It was droolworthy! ^_^)
And this is one of my favorite lines/scenes:
“You’re a hard person to care about, you really are.”
“Don’t you ever wonder if it’s really worth it sometimes?”
“No.”
^_^ (<3) [My review got cut off right here so I'm hopefully reposting it...]
It's just so like Naruto, to not even question that he'd care, yet unable to say exactly why he would. And then deny it completely. :D And then there was the moment for Sasuke when he rushed over to our dear blond's apartment after his nightmare...awwww, brotherly love...They're so sweet!
Okay, I could list off all my favorite scenes but that would take forever and _a lot_ of space, so I'll stop here.
But I can't wait to see how this turns out. In your summary you mention that Naruto runs away, and I hope you follow through with it because it really is an interesting idea. And then we've got the Jounin teachers discussing some sort of assignment/mission for a bunch of them...I can't believe you left it on such a note! I hope you haven't given up on this fic. Looking forward to the next update!
(Chapter 3)