rate_review Reviews

I really like how you started the story--it flows very well. (Heehee, Lee's supposed "birthday gift" was awesome. Go SakuLee!) And your characterization is _great_ (their reactions are excellent at every turn), almost in-character, if my fangirlishness isn't clouding my judgment...too much... ^_^;;

The NaruSaku scene is harsh and probably terrifyingly close to the truth, if it were to ever happen. Poor, dumb, narrow-minded girl. (:shakes head sadly) But it was sweet and endearing while it lasted, and I'm glad that you acknowledged it could happen especially with his new look (which should be canon, btw! ;D). Oh, but the smut scene is awesome. Don't ever consider changing it! =) (Thank you for the sex scene, btw! It was droolworthy! ^_^)

And this is one of my favorite lines/scenes:

“You’re a hard person to care about, you really are.”
“Don’t you ever wonder if it’s really worth it sometimes?”
“No.”

^_^ (:love) (My review got cut off right here (BOTH times :grumble) so I'm reposting it...Hope you don't mind)
It's just so like Naruto, to not even question that he'd care, yet unable to say exactly why he would. And then deny it completely. :D And then there was the moment for Sasuke when he rushed over to our dear blond's apartment after his nightmare...awwww, brotherly love...They're so sweet!
Okay, I could list off all my favorite scenes but that would take forever and _a lot_ of space, so I'll stop here.

But I can't wait to see how this turns out. In your summary you mention that Naruto runs away, and I hope you follow through with it because it really is an interesting idea. And then we've got the Jounin teachers discussing some sort of assignment/mission for a bunch of them...I can't believe you left it on such a note! I hope you haven't given up on this fic. Looking forward to the next update!

(Chapter 3)

I for one am happy they fucked.The scene between Sakura and Naruto was a small masterpeice ,tender,plasma hot.It is the best Peice with a female in it I have ever read (well outside a magazine called ON OUR Backs but it is all yuri) Thank you for not being coy ,obviously manipulative,having a fresher take on the characters and having some wicked bite,yeah! Sasuke is charming in this(so he treats Naruto's whims as law so thats so cool)straightforward and I liked that there was no f'g angst ing over what happened , it was great ,just do it somemore yeah(well what there was was done subtly ,treating the reader like a person who the writer respects enough to assume they will get the point) I waited a long time for this and you did come up with quality so...please do not ever take that long to update again,its scary!

Yay so happy, finally an update. and how cruel of you to wait so long leaving us with that cliff hanger.

I'm intrigued by your fiction.It seems so real,not just "fuck for fuck" type ,though it's really a pity that Shika loves Ino.Sakura is a stupid girl , I must say, but thanks to her,Sasuke-Naruto's bind could be physical. Well,even though I'm not fond of the fucking process, I‘m very impressed by Sasuke's patience and skill.Did Sasuke really have a relationship with Kakashi?Poor Kakashi,being using as a vent. I only hope it would not bother Naruto too much.

Anyway,I can't wait to see the next chapter.Would they carry out a very difficult assignment which must use 'badger game"?How could SasuNaru's relation get along?Please hurry up,girl.

OMG... i was laughing so bad at the part where Kiba rushed in at the end, swore, and as quick as he rushed in ... dashed out... hahahaha!!! I can't wait for the next part now... Go For IT~!!! More insane mood breakers!!! I love those apparently. [wink]

OMG Im loving this story so far, the whole smut scene was great, though i was a little disappointed Kiba inturupted Naruto's chance to be seme, and I am a little confused about the whole Kakashi and Kurenai (i'm a kaka/iruka fan myself, but i'm not opposed to alternet pairings) thing it just seems a little misplaced, *shrugs* perhaps its tied in better in the next chapter, and i also get this feeling that Kakashi and Sasuke had something *shrugs* future chapters shall tell, right ^__^

please continue as soon as humanly possible!!!

*Bows down* "I AM NOT WORTH!!! I AM NOT WORTH!! I AM NOT WORTHY!! I AM NOT WORTHY!!!
That is how I feel after reading this. That was unbelievable. Keep up the awesome work. COOLSA!!!!

Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy!!!

I hope that this is going to be all SasuNaru 'cause iI love that (Naruto is the uke all way through). It's so great..Naruto is so sure he can have it the other way around, but Sasuke's not gonna have it. It's just ment to be that way!! <3 <3 <3 And everything else I have to say.. I LOVE YOU'RE STORY LIKE I'VE EVER LOVED ANYTHING BEFORE!! <3<3 :DD :)

I hope that this is going to be all SasuNaru 'cause iI love that (Naruto is the uke all way through). It's so great..Naruto is so sure he can have it the other way around, but Sasuke's not gonna have it. It's just ment to be that way!! <3 <3 <3 And everything else I have to say.. I LOVE YOU'RE STORY LIKE I'VE EVER LOVED ANYTHING BEFORE!! <3<3 :DD :)

<3 <3 <3 And everything else I have to say.. I LOVE YOU'RE STORY LIKE I'VE EVER LOVED ANYTHING BEFORE!! <3<3 :DD :)