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for Eyes of Fire

by ArcherMartyr

schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update this one soon it sounds interesting
i will bookmark this to check on it another day
person Sam
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow starting off good. a little confusing as it jumps back and forth with his memory, but i doubt that after 15 years Naruto would forget sasuke so i'm gonna guess that Naruto had a son, and that Naruto is the 6th? am i right?!?!? *Liking the story and looking forward to update*
person Natasha
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
COME ON, KEEP IT GOING GIRl....BOY.....PERSON..WOOT!! I think this is goin pretty goooood but you must continue on....thats right...on you go,git! Please finish this story!!! ;_; And when u do, or atleast ahve another chapter up, email me about it please and thank yoooou's ^-^
person Felix
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
arararararararararaaa~! whats next?!? probably naruto is the 6 and that ANBU is his child, but-but-but! I NEED TO READ MOREEE!!
person gp
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god!! u must continue this!! huhuuuu i can feel... it's a really good story!! =D
update update!! =D=D
person Phoe-chan
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe your hints that I picked up on suggest that the young man Sasuke is facing is not Naruto but his son. Just a few things. Him being just the way he remembered him, his face confused when Sasuke calls him Naruto and his denial of knowing of him. That and the rokudaime line... I suppose we'll see. *chuckles*

Nice job.

Phoe-chan
person Chimi_Tenshi
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOh! Is the anbu captain Naru-chan's son? That'd be so coolies! And is Naru the sixth hokage?
Wheee! So many questions! Write soon! I want to see more! XD
Hmmm...but the captain did say he didn't know of whom Sasuke spoke of...*confuses herself in corner*
Well, enough of my rambling! Update soon! Wanna read more!
...I'm getting quite repetitive aren't I? XP
Anyways, I love your writing too! Waiting for more!
person bhodi li
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
person izumi
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naruto's son??? who's the mother/father?? is naruto the 6th now??? ohhh.. so much question...
person bhodi li
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie! MORE MORE MORE! BAD SASUKE! WUB IT!