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for Wolfie Foxie

by VampiaZee

person sa-chan
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Way to go! 2 thumbs up! I love your story.
person Husband-Chyan AKA LeMoNsChan AKA Sotenju AKA Aya
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO WIFE-CHYAN~! AND VAMPY, too <3333333333333 :3 Now I just wait for teh hawt raunchy shmex >3
person Tsugath
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! He was rescued. So can we have more hot smex next chapter?
person LaiN
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue! Continue! Pretty please ToT Your story is so nice, beautifully... hot. Continue x3
person Mimi
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR STORYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Natalie
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Hee hee* Thanks for the replie! It IS like that story I mentioned in the last review,huh? I'm going to be honest with you,the first chapter was better,but the second
ROCKED still! Here are some ideas for you for the 4th and 5th and other chapters (you said you had three chapters done already,no? Hee hee!):

1.Sasuke and other wolves go crazy on the full moon for lust. (Didn't I put that in the last review?)
2.Naruto goes into TWO different heats,one when they lust AFTER him and two when HE lust after them while THEY still want to take him,but Sasuke's too protective and only wants HIMSELF to take poor Naru-chan (I have NO RIGHT to call him that,so don't tell Sasuke!)
3.Itachi appears (I'm going to let YOU use YOUR imagination).
4.Neji comforts Gaara. (Gaara needs someone too!)

Great chapy,till next time-bye!
person bhodi li
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the tenth and eleventh chapter seem to have repeated. I LOVE THIS STORY! I was so happy it was updated. I like the morning scene...too bad they didn't do anything more. I hope you continue and we get to the wedding soon...meaning wedding night..hehehehe..and babies...lots of babies, too! Sasuke is very emotional and I love the torturous father-son relationship he has with his father...is Itachi coming into the pix soon? I am grateful that Yondaime has entered the scene..maybe he'll push up the wedding date. Naruto is very feminine..do you go into why he has no hunting skills or why he was raised so femininely? GREAT JOB...I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!
person vampchic
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter two was really intense at the end there. but why was the fox and wolf clans bombing them when they knew they had Naruto??? and I'm glad that Gaara ended up helping the blond. although I was kind of looking forward to a rape scene. I'm such a perv.*shakes head sadly*
anyway, I hope that you update soon. I really like this story. I want to read more!!
person mE
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You stupid Vampia Zee!! How can you let us wait so long?! I've been waiting and waiting for the next chapter!! Arg I love this story so~~ much!! Hurry or I'll kill you!! :DD *criesherheartou*
person T.K-kun
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH!! i almost forgot about this fic, since it was such a long
time ago that i read it. but i remember liking it very much
from before, and i still do! ahh! poor gaara... but i'm a big
sasunaru fan, so guess it turned out for the best. hope he's
alright though. no hard feelings of getting back at the sasunaru
couple. =/ this was a great chapter. i understand the life thing
in the way of story writing(i shouldn't be tlaking though, i
haven't even updated my fic in such a long time, haha) but
it's great that each of your chapters are really long. greatly
appreciated! update when life calms down! excellent job here =)