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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! *dances*
I love Gaara, I hope there's more of him in later chapters.
I love Gaara, I hope there's more of him in later chapters.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! you updated! I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Im so glad you updated! I'll be looking for the next chapter!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are one amazing person! This story is so great. I love SasuNaru. I can't help but feel a bit bad for Gaara though. Poor guy, he gets no love...
You don't need to explain about the MPREG...It's fanfiction, and there's plenty of MPREG's out there anyway.
Oh, and I saw your pictures...They're sooo cute! You should draw Gaara ^.^
You don't need to explain about the MPREG...It's fanfiction, and there's plenty of MPREG's out there anyway.
Oh, and I saw your pictures...They're sooo cute! You should draw Gaara ^.^
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i never lost hope that one of my favorite stories would get updated!! you've done a wonderful job with this chapter, as with the first. i loved the inclusion of gaara and i really hope sasuke is ok! please update soon!!! ^_^
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;__; poor Gaara...................................you should have Lee come in and they can be together forever happily XDDD ...anyways.. >o< I hope everyone comes out okay (excluding the already dead Shukaku... hahaha stupid Shukaku).. <3 chapter 2, can't wait for the next chapter >o<
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW GREAT this was a really good chapter and an even better fic that u have started so please update soon like now
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! SUCH A GOOD STORY!! Although there ar eonly two chapters, your chapters are SOOO DELICIOUSLY LONG!!! Just the way I like it. The pants and shirts kinda throw me off in your story so I just mainly imagine all of the characters' outfits much like that of the wolf demon tribe outfits in Inuyasha (think Kouga). I really love your story. I hope you'll be able to continue with such a promising hit!. I love how Sasuke and Naruto are so loving now and Sasuke is willing to give everything to keep his usurakontachi safe...*dreamy sigh* sooooo romantic. So much action, adventure, romance, i'm just dying of excitement since my innards feel so gigli. YOU MUST CONTINUE FOR MY SANITY! NOT THAT I HAD A WHOLE LOT TO BEGIN WITH!!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you finally updated your story (I didn't believe you would update anymore).
So well... first of all I don't think this chapter was un-original - well... Gaara did steal Naruto, but you explained why he liked him and you didn't go through with the rape so that made me glad - if you had I'd have turned the story of. It's not like I didn't like rape-stories at the beginning, but most of the time they either solve the problem too quickly or too slow and it only serves to make the uke guy more uke-ish and for that there are other and better ways of doing it. Anyway, I liked how you solved why Gaara liked Naruto. So why did you need him for the story?
Making Shukaku Gaara's father was defenitely interesting - and that they 'fought' over Kyuubi is too (so I hate that she was a slave, but that's cause I don't like how women always have to listen to their men all the time ^^;;; )
So now I have a few questions: Will Itachi also come up in the story? (If yes... PLEASE don't make him want Naruto... I love the idea of teasing, but I dislike all the fights over one guy (girl)
How come Naruto was raised like that? (I mean, he can't fight and things and acts like a girl. That seems really weird to me)
Hope you'll continue sooner this time ^^ Continue your good work ^_^
So well... first of all I don't think this chapter was un-original - well... Gaara did steal Naruto, but you explained why he liked him and you didn't go through with the rape so that made me glad - if you had I'd have turned the story of. It's not like I didn't like rape-stories at the beginning, but most of the time they either solve the problem too quickly or too slow and it only serves to make the uke guy more uke-ish and for that there are other and better ways of doing it. Anyway, I liked how you solved why Gaara liked Naruto. So why did you need him for the story?
Making Shukaku Gaara's father was defenitely interesting - and that they 'fought' over Kyuubi is too (so I hate that she was a slave, but that's cause I don't like how women always have to listen to their men all the time ^^;;; )
So now I have a few questions: Will Itachi also come up in the story? (If yes... PLEASE don't make him want Naruto... I love the idea of teasing, but I dislike all the fights over one guy (girl)
How come Naruto was raised like that? (I mean, he can't fight and things and acts like a girl. That seems really weird to me)
Hope you'll continue sooner this time ^^ Continue your good work ^_^
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg sooo good !!! update soon ~
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi im just here to cheer on you. and to nag you to continue with this fiction. dont laze around and start updating, its been over a month now. i'm the only one who has rights of lazing around hahaha... just keep it up!