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for Wolfie Foxie

by VampiaZee

person madmaggie
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great sory. update soon
person Michiru
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I didn't think I would like this story very much, but it was actually very good! I'm not sure exactly how two males could reproduce, but hey - whatever. It doesn't have to be realistic... just enjoyable to read. :p I hope that you will add another chapter soon! I look forward to reading more!
person Natalie
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK,well umm.......I'm sorry for being (how do I say?) so mean. I REALLY like Wolfie Foxie,and I just couldn't wait! I'm afraid to write something like that on the computer incase my parents read it. Sorry! I can't wait for the next chapters! Over and Out.
person Demon
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon!!! hehehe next time you know not to save over the chapter ^.^ well i am loving your fic
person Anon
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the heads up about why it's taking so long. Don't feel bad about deleting (or saving over as the case may be) part of the story, it happens to the best of us. I've enjoyed the story a lot, and it's worth waiting for the next chatper.
person TenshiKaitou
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, the little flash movie is totally adorable and funny. make more of such? onegaiiiiii
person yukiko
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for it, hurry up !!!!
person Hitomi
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 1) Shaky storyline and many *many* spelling mistakes. Fuck grammar, but spelling counts.
Other than that, I like it. Would like it more if you cared to explain how a man can bear a child. I mean really, they don't have a womb for christ's sake! Please, make your AU MAKE SENSE.

But I like Sasuke and Naruto's perverted moments. Pervert!Sasuke rules.


Ja ne~
person Michrure
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love this fic! very well written! and have you seen this artwork?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/13371378/

They are cats here, but when I read this fic it reminded me of this picture. Great huh? I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
person Kativa-chan
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was sooo cute ^.^ You drew all of that? It must have taken forever! It was amazing though, and so funny!

I really do hope you update soon.