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by myth

person kayoko
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story got reposted, yay!~

it's scary how once you start reading this fic, you have to continue until there are no more chapters to read. ^_^

i'm still hanging on edge of that cliff! I look forward to when you get the time to update the fic!~

Thank you!
person WaterBookLover
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You reposted! Yay! Woohoo! Also, it's a lot hotter than I remember! ^_~ Keep chugging!
person archermartyr
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please oh please finish it this time!
person Picky
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg u're back u're back! ^^
*huggles* really love this fic~~ so glad to know that u're still working on it. *re-reading all ur reposts now* ^^
hope things are well.. and eagerly waiting for new chapters! *glomps*
person Tsugath
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since you are reposting, does that mean you are going to update too? We were left at a cliff hanger at the end of the last chapter! I want to know if they rescue the younger Uchiha brother, and will Naruto and Sasuke ever get back together now that they have an uneasy peace?
Please please thing about it!
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i remember reading this way back before this site had problems. i loved it back then but i wasn't into reviewing back then. plus, you didn't update at all in a while. just saying i love your story. and please update pass chapter 16^_^V
person ghostninja85
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm very happy that you have decided to continue this fic. I was worried that you were never going to continue it, especially after that cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to the other revised chapters.

However, there are still quite a few grammar mistakes in these chapters. Most of them concern verbs that do not agree with the sentence tense. Please pay attention to those in the future.

Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Rachel Dracon
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, that's awesome! Sasuke's sons and the other girl are hilarious as a team, just like team seven. It was intertesting to see Saskue lose it like that as soon as he heard Naruto's back, I can't wait for them to actually meet again face to face. Update soon!!!