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by myth

schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE!! NNOOOUU!!!! HE HAS TO BE SAVED!! >o< And what's w/ these memory flash's Ryoichi keeps having?
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! really!!!! i spend the day reading and i couldn't take my eyes off the screen! i can't wait to read more! i hope naruto will be able to help ryoichi! he is a troublesome kid and he seems to need more help than his dead-last brother...
please, i beg you, UPDATE SOON!
person Raiin
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no no!
What the heck is this?
Naruto and Sasuke have to end up together.
D<
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!! Dont leave me hanging like that. Soooo wrong lol. I fucking ove this story, the writing the plot the charactors...everything. Please for the love of all things holy update again soon.
person Hyarou
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, oh god, OH GOD!!! You are making this story too interesting!! I am shaking here. Update soon, I have to know what happens next.
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow....

Sasuke is going to tell finally, Naruto is losing his mind, and Susuke's kids are getting into trouble...

Great work!
person LadyWolf
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is Ryoichi's problem with his brother???? I've never seen such...hatred toward a sibling...:o(

He's only what 8 or 9?? What the hell happened for him to be such a little dick!!!!

Please post soon..
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!!!! This was a fantastic chapter!!!! Sasuke is realizing how he needs to be a positive force in his kids lives and remember that he loves them and they r what gives him strength.:D Im so happy Kenji spied the picture and envelope from the trash and i cant help but think they will come in handy when Ryo's plan comes to fruition.LOL I also loved how Hikari talked to her mom (Ino) about Naruto and found out extra stuff she hadnt thought of.:D When i read that the boys were going to be enrolled into Taijutsu class i was praying it would be Rock Lee and not a made up character. Yaay!! I cant wait for Ryo's plan and the class with Lee. Im so excited!!!XD
person kiayu
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
those kids of sasuke are just wonderful lolz i love this im glad i started reading it :D
person BumbleBee
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sooooo love that story!! Please update soon! *many hugs*