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lmao@ ryoichi reaction to lee. lmao i can so picture that. why so much hate between the twins. they are so much like naru and sasu why is that?

What!??!?!?! Sasuke doesn't want Naruto??!??!
D:
Can you please please please post more!!!
I'm not going to be able to sleep with that kind ending!!!

An excellent read, can't wait until you post more!~

Oh im so glad Kenji found out about team 7 and saw the pictures. Sasuke's right about having 2 reasons to exist. Im so happy to hear that he actually loves his sons and how they are so very different from one another. Cant wait for more!! X3

This is a absolutly amazing story i really love it. I am a devoted fanfiction reader an although i cannot write fanfiction (sad face) i love to read anything an everything so id like to say that i am really enjoying your story it makes up for every low quality or just plain bad one that i come across i implore you to keep writing and updating this story and would be pleased to read other stories that you care to right

Thankfully,
silverdragon0315(this is my friends screenname

I really enjoyed reading this story so far and it would be a shame not to review it. I know there are a lot of Sasuke returning after forever/Naruto returning after forever fics out there but you definetly make this one special. I love how you have Sasuke's twins being like the former him and former Naruto. It was really cute their fights and how Naruto quickly sees his former team in his new team.

I wish that Naruto can run into more of his friends. Though I guess Neji wouldn't want to talk to him much. But there is still Rock Lee and Kiba. I'm pretty sure they would be more than willing to see Naruto. And I can't until the others finally get a real mission. Maybe one of the team members can get kidnapped like Kenji or something and they have to go same him. Which might actually make his brother be willing to save him for once instead of killing him.

But whatever you do will sure be great. E-mail me when you do update again... My e-mail is 'simplywandering@yahoo.com' Thanks.

OMG!!! I have to admit i like when someone wants me also but cant have me. hehe I feel so bad for Sasuke but like Naruto said u cant it both ways. I like that he and Hinata are together. I especially liked when Sasuke confronted Naruto on the mission and then turned 360 degrees back to business. Wow!! X3

OMG!! How awful!!! >.< Sasuke's jealous rage sent Naruto's only other beloved to her death.T__T Now Neji and im sure the rest of the Hyuga clan hold Naruto responsible.T__T
If only Sasuke had sent her on a wild goose chase around the city or something. Damn it!!! He is a love scorned wreck.:( I wonder if he'll tell the Hyuga the truth or is that insignificant for the story. Oh well, this chapter was thrilling with the battle. o.o

Ooooh so many good things happened in this chapter. This was a fun chapter. I loved how Naruto taught them about chakra control to walk up the wall to finish the job quicker. Kenji is just like Naruto i like that. He can especially understand what Kenji is going through with his brother and father. I also loved how Naruto handled Ryoichi's prider and his mean comments. I cant wait for the kids to find out how their parents grew up with Naruto.:D I especially loved the confrontation between Naruto and Sasuke. Sasuke's a bit delusional thinking his kids r ready for C ranked missions. He really ought to stalked the team to see how atrocious his pride and joy act with Naruto. Then he could kinda set him straight but it may not be the right time.:( Great chapter!! Cant wait for the next!! X3

This sounds like an exciting story. I cant wait to see if Sasuke's son will even like Naruto, much less let him teach him anything. LOL