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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ^-^ But I really can't wait for reason, why Naruto and Sasuke aren't with each other. Heh And I can't wait for more. so please uptoad soon :)
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What the heck happened between those two? Sasuke must have chosen Sakura over Naruto b/c of the obvious...no..has to be something else..
And what's up with the twins?? Will they ever get along?? They should because they can only trust each other..
Post soon!!!
And what's up with the twins?? Will they ever get along?? They should because they can only trust each other..
Post soon!!!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You. Never -EVER- abandon this story. It is the most amazing and worthwhile fic I have read in a while. I was completely blown away...COMPLETELY! It has soo much potential and I love how flawed and desprate the characters are. I am a sucker for these 'projected into the future' stories.
For a non-native english speaker/writter, you're doing a damn good job. Please, please, if you read this review, don't stop writing this fic and update at least once a year to appease my thirsting soul.
For a non-native english speaker/writter, you're doing a damn good job. Please, please, if you read this review, don't stop writing this fic and update at least once a year to appease my thirsting soul.
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You write an amazingly detailed story! That lemon was so raw and hot ;-) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am so glad you're coming back with this story. I was so happy to see it on the list of fics, I actually jumped up and down with joy. T^T Oh wow, I'm just so happy you've decided to do a bit of a rewrite. Are you planning to continue where you left off before, or are you going to rewrite the latter chapters completely? Please say you won't! You left us on quite the cliffhanger. heehee
Well anyway, thank you so very much for updated and I hope you can do it again very soon. ^^
Well anyway, thank you so very much for updated and I hope you can do it again very soon. ^^
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is so unbelievably blind and stupid at times. He's never going to regain Naruto's respect if he keeps treating his second born like trash.
This is an excellent story. Keep up the great work! ^^
This is an excellent story. Keep up the great work! ^^
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! can't say i've read anything like this before ... close but not too close. poor hinata! i kinda like her and probably should read some naruhina fics. anyhoo, nice job on this story and will definitely keep an eye out for future chapters!
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update please update please cause i really want to know what us going to happen next so please update don't leave me hanging
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing