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by myth

person zhangyi
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a chinese girl,I love this story very much.But I can't find the other chapters,and I'm eager to read the rest.Can you Email them to me?Thank you very much!!!
my email address:staying168@163.com
person jazzy
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi I don't know if you check in from time to time but, it seems there was a problem and not all eighteen of your chapters was put up. If you could repost them I would love to re-read them again please.(as would many people I think, though none have seemed to bug you about it in this forum ^-^)

And please are you still writing?? I just absolutely love this story it's complex and emotional and engaging and I want to know whats going to happen with the twins and their father and naruto and everything...
person animeaddict666
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable read. The story flows nicely. The kids are definately great, and I think you should write them more! After all, they are your own characters! Their personalities are already amusing. Hope to see more work from you in the future
person Lynn
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!!! I can't wait for more Sasu/Naru! Please update soon:)
person losthimagain
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why haven't you updated this?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! It seems so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'LL GIVE YOU SOME COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was an interesting story. Please upadate!
person hypnotic
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how cruel are you !?!? for the love of sasuke-kun and naru-chan update now! or as soon as you can...pleas...but yeah! update woman...i really like this story-

~ ja.
person Lady gray
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, what a great story, I hope you decide to update.
person Ryu
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is really good. Please write more. I really wanna know what happens!


~Ryu~
person animeemaniac
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story and was wondering if you were going to be updating it any time soon?