rate_review Reviews

your story certainly is interesting, i really like how you made sasu so determined to find out more about naru and kept both of them fundamentally true to their personalities. the stalking is hilarious and the chance that naru has been given to exist in circumstances outside of konoha for sasu to see is also nice. it also makes jealousy a bit more convenient, lol

hehehe, fangirl 407.........the jedi force.......ok.....BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! I COULDN'T HOLD IN THE LAUGHTER ANYMORE!!!!!!!
love ya,
Kai

ooooooh......me LOVES possessive sasuke....and we ALL know Sasuke is DEFINITELY gay, but Naruto is DEFINITELY bisexual, i mean, seriously, there's like, subconcious yaoi throughout the series!
Love ya!
Kai

WOW that´s amazing!! I want to know what happen next!! What is Naruto doing!! I MUST KNOW!! Aww hope you submit more chapters. Great job with this wonderfull story!!

My rate for you: +++++

1. Very OOC. Very very OOC. Study the characters and their mannerisms more.

2. Why did you use the "o" in front of bento? No need to be overly polite here... It's just a fanfic. o.O; If you want to use the polite form, then why is "ohayo" left in its non-formal form...? You're confusing me with this inconsistant Japanese. @@;

3. Using Japanese [incorrectly... *points to #2*] not only makes you look less professional, but also implies that they were not speaking Japanese in the first place.

4. Don't freak out at me and say I'm a flamer. I'm not. I'm a critic, and not a sugarcoated. Deal with it. =P

hahahaa
i was laughing so hard at the part where sasuke was staring at naruto taking a shower! and of course.. his nosebleed hahahaha keep going and you have my support!!!! now i should go n finish chpt 3 and 4... hehe ill review those afterwards

hehehe, thanks to me!! XDDD i like how sasuke numbers the fangirls!! 407 will die!! XP very interesting fic!! yay, naruto is getting noticed and he answered every question in order! what will happen if this town finds out about the kyuubi? yay for school uniforms and rabid fangirls in those uniforms!! XDD UPDATE SOON!!

hehehehe, is he doing what I think he's doing? XDDD UPDATE SOON!! I really enjoy reading your fic!

as i promised i am reviewing again~!!!!
this is so funny, getting really interesting too.. especially when sasuke was so unconsciously into the 'sexy' naruto hahaha

lol..YAY SAMURAI WROTE A FANFIC!!!!..
lol you used stoic...
this Fanfic was good..XD..better than my first fic..lol
keep updating..you're an awesome writer!!!
-STOIK