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person Amaya
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you have this in the het section an the title has "YAOI FANFIC" in big bold letters. This really shouldn't be here. It should be in Male/Male, or General. Please, next time you decide to put a story up, put it in the right damn catagory!

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person POST THIS SHIT PROPERLY
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK!?!?! CAN YOU READ!?!? THIS IS THE EHT SECTION! POST THIS GARBAGE IN THE PROPER PLACE! STUPID FUCK!
person cibiboy
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im so shoked im choking on my own spit update soon
person KilluaHysoka
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~Author~
Firstly, im a guy, so don;t call me lolita haha.

Secondly, i am a fag, so with that said, I decided to write this naruto yaoi fan fic as realisticly as possible as I said so before. I mean anyone teen whos gay knows growing up, its not fun and happy times, with people. Majority of these online fan fics are all, "OO im gay..but than everyone excepts you, and you end up ahving sex..", HELL NOOO. I mean realisticly, that soo doesn;t happen. You feel hate,r egret, remoarse, confusion, joy, all bundle up in one. Any with the FAG word..I mean god, if your gay and havent been Gay Bashed yet, your living in a preety big closet there. So i mean hey, i gave the warnings at the begining of each chapter, so if you can;t handle the ehat, thats fine if you want to pretend that in the world of fanfiction, everyone is gay and its easy, but i set out to write something different, and i am. But anywho thanks for your comments, and if you lsot intrest thats fine, I still got 150 or so people to please with more chapters, so to me critics and 1 lost comes with the terriotory, no biggie :)
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~Author~

Hi all. Well chapter 5 is up. As you notice it takes me, 2, to 4 days per chapter. Since I seem to have a small loyal fans hehe, im trying to produce the best intense meangingful chapters, i can come up with and its definatley going well. This are about to become worst as more obstacles show themselves that will stand in the way of Sasuke and Naruto, and the big question still remains, Will Sasuke have Naruto? Anyway i hope you enjoy chapter 5, your comments are always a great motivation, so enjoy :)

http://www.anilit.tk
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Killua
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person Anon
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! dial it down lolita! Your using the word fag (Faggot) Too much, I lost intrest in your story, and I'm confused about lots of things, so dial it donw.
person yoroshiku
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmmmm... more interresting than i expected... I LIKE IT!!!
person Killua
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~author~

hi all. Sorry for the 2 day delay. I had to go to work our station, so i got back and wrote this as soon as I could, and felt ready to. With chapter 4 I believe its somewhat clear of the future obstacles both naruto and Sasuke will be facing as well as some minor happening with the sub characters. I hope you enjoy chapter 4 and be sure there are many twist and turns, and unexpected surprises to come soon, so do stay tune, thanks.

~Killua~
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(PS) I am looking for editors who have the time and deciation to help me edit my work, with spelling and grammar. if intrested please email me at btgheat@gmail.com.
In order to apply you need to be/have:

Grade 11 English Complete
MSN

thanks again.
person ghostninja85
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intense chapter. I liked how you showed everyone's emotions, and I wonder what Shikamaru is up to.

Update as soon as you can! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Killua
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Note from Author:
with regards to Sasuke, as someone else has already asked about what I am doing with his cahracter. I believe that Sasuke is not out of character. The way i am portraying him thous far, is a 13 year old boy strugglnig with the fact, he may be gay. Unlike other YAOi fanfics, that make it seem like an easy thing, "OOo i think im gay so weee lets jsut go with that", like it's something easy. In truth i am writting Sasukes and Naruto's characters as realistic as I can, in the eys ofa real 13 year old boy discovering truth about themselves, so i am mainly looknig to write what Sasuke, being the silent, cold type, would be like if this situation occured to him, confused, angry, irritable, scared, and so forth. Thanks and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.