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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waah~ I love this sotry ^-^ You're writing everything so perfectly! Well I actually cant really say that cause I've never seen "The Labyrinth" - though I've heard many amazing things about it. Reading your story just makes me want to see it even more! And I *love* the way you wrote Kabuto in Chapter 2 x) Made me giggle. I hope you update soon!!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o that was... wierd... what happens next?
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's great you updated! Never tought you would. Your story is funny and cute. Lots of weird things. Good SasuNaru. They're well in characters, well, for a story like this. Love it. Update sooner please. Good luck! Ja ne!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. ...Um I love the movie the Labyrinth when I was a little kid, and I love your story. Will you done with the Labyrinth we will do a fellow up chapter ???????
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...you've got an awesome idea going on here, but I recommend stepping away from 'the Labyrinth' script. It puts everyone out of character and kind of kills the high potential for this story.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! i love that moive the Labyrinth
but anyway's i hope to see more good chapters i want to read more
of this wanderful story and maybe Sasuke and Naruto getting it on later*smirks*
well good luck i want to read the next chapter soon!
Love,Yaoi Fan=^^=
but anyway's i hope to see more good chapters i want to read more
of this wanderful story and maybe Sasuke and Naruto getting it on later*smirks*
well good luck i want to read the next chapter soon!
Love,Yaoi Fan=^^=
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is hilarious ~ u attracted me *looks at u dazed. the Labyrinth was this kinky urm...interest of mine as a kid lol!! i'm so glad that someone like tou has picked up Naruto and the famous david "horny" bowie movie and mushed it together! It really surprised me that u've got oro over sasu xD poor naruto lol XD no one is trying to seduce him :D !! Gabatte yo! great work thus far
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xD gosh it's like XD i kind akno the story line for it coz ur following the movie quiet strictly xD do throw in some surprises :D get work on the Naru Sasu :D kabuto gets some action :D lol yippee!!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing! Whoo! Can I tell you how much I'm falling in love with the story? I've read some Gundam Wing renditions of The Labyrinth before I even saw the movie, then I did, and I love them even more. Your beta-work (whoo, go self-betas!) is really good, Word is a good program to use (although sometimes it's wrong.) when beta-ing. And I like your writing style and the way you put it together. And the Sasunaru. I like that too. Lol.
_Amanda
_Amanda
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man this is great!!! Continue please!!! Update soon!!! ^_______^