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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Hehhehe funny ending! I would LOVE to see more soon!
K'?! K'!
Ja ne~^^
Hehhehe funny ending! I would LOVE to see more soon!
K'?! K'!
Ja ne~^^
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe I love protective Naruto...Its so cute the he gets all possesive when Pervert Oro. tries to take Sasuke. ^-^ You should put more things in it next chapter. I suggest to write your password and screen name on a piece of paper REALLY close to your computer.. that what i do for phone numbers. I can't wait for next chapter!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah! What a fun fusion. I can see where you have trouble fitting Sasuke in with Naruto, where there was only one character in the original, but it's still good. And, hee! Jiraiya and Tsunade together are always so cute; thank you for giving them a cameo.
--Ruby
--Ruby
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An interesting idea... so far I like it... you do however at times refer to Naruto as a she... at one point while he's telling his little brother the story... and another time before that...
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo funny! I think I've seen parts of the Labyrinth but not that much. Anyway I can't wait until the next chapter! I want to see what characters you're going to use and so on! ^___^
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you didn't give up on this story after loosing it. I look forward to the next chapter.