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for Innocence

by ivybluesummers

person sapphirexkat2
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! the characterization you provided was good. well done!
person Siarra
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This was so wonderful, I just loved it. The style of writing is great. There are other fics out there with the same storyline, but this one had a very good ambience to it and some of the details gave the whole thing a dream-like feel to it. The ending was also interesting and very, very good. It was the perfect finishing touch.
I hope to read more from you in the future.
person lolki
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more it was good
person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....that was really neat. I liked the story line a lot -- very clever. Your writing style is very unusual, though -- intriguing, but a bit difficult to follow at times. Still, your fic was good........ kepp up the good work!!!