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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually don't really know what to say.
I'm just so impressed by ur story :O
It's like... a hand grabbing for your heart and mind and drawing u into the story, ur style of writing is just awesome, how u describe appearance and feelings of the characters makes one crave for more and more.
I love it <3
U are one of those gods of FF I'd like to build a shrine for :X *worships u*
baba Lithi ^^/)
I'm just so impressed by ur story :O
It's like... a hand grabbing for your heart and mind and drawing u into the story, ur style of writing is just awesome, how u describe appearance and feelings of the characters makes one crave for more and more.
I love it <3
U are one of those gods of FF I'd like to build a shrine for :X *worships u*
baba Lithi ^^/)
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic left me breathless. You've captured Naruto and Sasuke so well. Every chapter leaves me craving more. Sasuke [in And ashes, wonderful title btw] is just so Sasuke! I could picture him going through this. And the hints that the kyuubi may still be around. Oh wow! I'm just thrilled whenever there's a new chapter. And then there's your writing style. It just grabs me and won't let go! I look forward for more. Thank you for this amazing fic!
Milli
Milli
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I reread this chapter and it just keeps getting better.This is really finely crafted,Sasuke feels like an older Sasuke but his life,so odd.Boom stuff.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've never cried over a fanfiction before. I don't know if it just makes me a ridiculous fool or you a one hell of a writer but I did cry reading this one. Anyway I just wanted to thank you. I usually don't comment on these type of things, but then again I also don't react like this to almost anything.
It was refreshing to cry again, it has been a long time since that last happened.
So thank you.
It was refreshing to cry again, it has been a long time since that last happened.
So thank you.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of the best character death fics I've read. And I've read quite a few. Congrats.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im so confused, hahahaha... but i really enjoy reading this though. i'll be looking forward to the next chapter =)
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Am very, very interested in seeing how this fic turns out. I mean... I suppose there'll be more of Naruto? It seems that way to me... So it'll be interesting to see how you pull that off, since the guy is dead and all. And besides, I really like your writing style too. Very nice and detailed, as the last chapter showed. In other words: update soon please?
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries madly*
Okay, I'm really crying. This is like my fourth time crying reading this fic. You're a WONDERFULY TALENTED AUTHOR!
Oh God T_T
Please continue.
Okay, I'm really crying. This is like my fourth time crying reading this fic. You're a WONDERFULY TALENTED AUTHOR!
Oh God T_T
Please continue.
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, I think you should put a "character death" warning on this fic for people who don't like to read that sorta thing.
Anyway, for the review... ye gods is this depressing! Interesting, but depressing. Of course, that's obviously what you're going for, so that's a good thing. And the image of Sasuke wearing make-up amuses me for some reason... I'm definitely interested in seeing how Sasuke goes about hunting Itachi, and how he's gonna fight 'im. *Bounces* Post the next chapter soon!
Anyway, for the review... ye gods is this depressing! Interesting, but depressing. Of course, that's obviously what you're going for, so that's a good thing. And the image of Sasuke wearing make-up amuses me for some reason... I'm definitely interested in seeing how Sasuke goes about hunting Itachi, and how he's gonna fight 'im. *Bounces* Post the next chapter soon!
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is beautifully written and executed; it leaves me quite satisfied with every new chapter. I really enjoy the gorgeous sprinklings of scenery, and the finesse with which you handle descriptions. Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to many more chapters.