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for And Ashes

by Saro

person blisblop
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heartbreaking,bizzare and so sad.The make up was a very vivid metaphore.(s)
person blisblop
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intence intreaging a believable Sasuke with a mature noirish feel.Kudos.I am really looking forward to thr reuinion(s).
person hogo-chan
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i really love your fic! its very deep and dark! (i know that sounds really corny!) but how are you gonna continue to make in a sasunaru now that naruto is dead! its no fun if sasuke just continues to obsess over him and do the whole remembering all the good times they had thing. but please continue and update fast! I really do love your fic! ^_^ see ya next chapter
person cfox
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi just read your story . it is quite good, I can hardley wait to see how you make it NaruSasuke whith one of them dead but I trust it will be a fun tale to get there.
person S2
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its a really interesting start..I wonder if Naruto or the fox is coming back? I can't wiat for next chapter! ^-^
person ghostninja85
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. This is the first fic i've read where Naruto has told Sasuke to kill him and he actually went through it.

Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person 123
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An angsty story is a good story. I'll keep an eye out for your next chapter.
person Shez
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. Thank God, finally I read something well-written and with some thought put into it. I was getting bloody sick of some of the horrid "works" posted here. Mind you, many are nice, but very few can I deem well-written. =3 Wonderful; I hope to see more from you soon. =D
person macy
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh..the angst. i love how the fic's just oozing angst. Hehehe...I like the way you write ^^ SasuNaru eh? I still can't figure out how you're going to do that...but i'm so curious to find out though! Great stor so far.
person Dominion
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly angst-ridden. I'm not sure whether to cry or read on.