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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very nice, well written, clear. I'm anxious to see how the story progresses, and whether Sasuke will succeed in his ambitions while Naruto failed. Their interaction was haunting and the lovely, realistic descriptions of Sasuke's appearance now tempt me to make fanart...
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I remember seeing this story posted around, especially at the livejournal community. I'm happy you decided to post it here.
It's intriguing. It honestly is. From your brilliant description of Sasuke's makeup, to character emotions, Naruto's request and his journey onwards on finding his brother; I am actually curious to where you're taking this story.
In fact, I always found your take on the characters and their dialogue quite realistic and your writing style portrays this beautifully.
Please update soon :)
It's intriguing. It honestly is. From your brilliant description of Sasuke's makeup, to character emotions, Naruto's request and his journey onwards on finding his brother; I am actually curious to where you're taking this story.
In fact, I always found your take on the characters and their dialogue quite realistic and your writing style portrays this beautifully.
Please update soon :)