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for Of Heaven and Hell

by harukakatana

person Yami-Hikari
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it I love it I love it!!!
I love it so much I had to do a fanart, The imagery in your story is just so amazing.
Here's the fanart!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18069610/
person AmuseMe
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yar I've been waiting for so long for this chapter. What can I say, I love it. I loved how you gave each character that "hint" that they've got an interesting past and Itachi... *dies* he was so sexy. Actually speaking about him, I don't care what other people say - you should have had Itachi have his way with Sasuke *drools some more* and have his way with Naruto *grabs the drool bucket*

Seriously, your style of writing is wonderful as always. I have no idea where you manage to draw all this discriptive genius from. I highly enjoyed the description of Itachi's walk towards Orochimaru's chambers, such nice imagery.

*sniggers at the thought of Sasuke and high-heels*
person lalala
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
argh! If it was Itachi, then who was the "he" in their conversation.
person chem chick
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really great. Really original, and I love the attention to detail and the way you describe everything! Kudos to you! Can't wait for more!
person Rowan
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, i loved everything that you've written so far. If you can please E-mail me when the next chapter is up, i cant wait! I can't help but think "are sasuke and naruto going to be back together again?" ..is this going to be a happy ending?, or a sad one >>;; anyways, i somehow knew it was gunna be Orochimaru or Itachi as the devil, i just knew it!
person KuraiKage
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nope, this chapter didn't lose my interest :D

I keep finding myself getting more and more attached to the way you write. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, ne?
person ochiba
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Your description of hell (esp. the carpet of snakes) was wonderful. I seriously hope this is the scratchwork and prelude to original fiction from you, as with a bit of refining, you'll be quite a delight in paperpack. Until that time comes... I think I'll be quite happy following your fanfiction.

I only have one request: please finish this amazing story (long fics usually are never finished ^_^;;)
person WolfPilot06
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit I was a little confused by the interlude with Kiniiri overthrowing Orochimaru, but I think you were deliberately going for a bit of deception, eh? Anyways, another beautiful chapter. Your descriptions are quite beautiful and eloquent (I, uh, actually forgot I reviewed your fic before. I'm a spastic reviewer at best, lazy to say the least), and I love your characterizations. I'm quite intrigued by your heaven/hell universe and can't wait to see how this is going to turn out. Again, the prerequisite plea for you to continue (although, doubtless, whether you will or won't is wholly up to you and is not affected in the least by my urges for you to do so). =)

**Wolf**
person Pantaloon
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Very interesting plot. I thought it had been Itachi while reading, only because the way you had intially portayed Sasuke had been /much/ different. The only thing I'm really hoping for is that the pairing will turn out to be a NaruSasu/SasuNaru, instead of just strictly SasuNaru. But either way, I'm glad you updated, and you have beautiful writing.
person Yami-Hikari
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was halfway throught the second chapter, and the amazing imagry got to me. I'm already working on a fanart of this.
The imagry you put into your writing amazes me, I can see every little detail as if I was there. It's like being transported to that world. Amazing is the only word I can come up with to describe this ...amazing.. work.
And you're saying *sorry* for the long chapters?! They're one of the best aspects of this stroy. I love the long chapters!!!
I shiver everytime I realise that I very nearly didn't look at this story becasue I don't usually go for AU Naruto stories. This story has opened up a whole new world of fics. I think I've gotta go see if you've done any other stroies. I'll cry if you haven't.