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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i'm slow....just got through chapter two...anyway...
"If demons had been able to transform into red, rubber spheres, Naruto would have known where the demon lay."
This is a really great line! Haha! It made me smile!
"He wondered if Adam and Eve had undergone the same feeling and thoughts in the Garden of Eden. But Sasuke was no snake. Just a demon."
I'd say that everything else in this fic was absolutely worth it just to get the opportunity to see that sentance...or three...whatever... oh yeah...and everything that followed it of course..*grin*
As far as i've read, this story is awesome! It was a little slow at the begining, but it's getting better and better at a frenzied pace! Yay! I'm kinda glad i waited a while to read it, because now i get to read a whole other chapter before i have to be like "WTF?" and wait again for you to update.
I wonder what will happen in next??? d(^-^)b
"If demons had been able to transform into red, rubber spheres, Naruto would have known where the demon lay."
This is a really great line! Haha! It made me smile!
"He wondered if Adam and Eve had undergone the same feeling and thoughts in the Garden of Eden. But Sasuke was no snake. Just a demon."
I'd say that everything else in this fic was absolutely worth it just to get the opportunity to see that sentance...or three...whatever... oh yeah...and everything that followed it of course..*grin*
As far as i've read, this story is awesome! It was a little slow at the begining, but it's getting better and better at a frenzied pace! Yay! I'm kinda glad i waited a while to read it, because now i get to read a whole other chapter before i have to be like "WTF?" and wait again for you to update.
I wonder what will happen in next??? d(^-^)b
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was really good.
glad you added the little explanation at the end, it really helped with things.
don't really have much to say, sorry. but thank you for writing and i look forward to the next part when it is ready ^_^
glad you added the little explanation at the end, it really helped with things.
don't really have much to say, sorry. but thank you for writing and i look forward to the next part when it is ready ^_^
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was poking around the site looking for good fiction, and boy, did I ever find good fiction. This is really - well, how can I describe this best? - it's really pretty! Beautifully written, with gorgeous descriptions and interesting characterizations. Please continue sometime soon! =)
**Wolf**
**Wolf**
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very well written, and I look forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter. This is the first time I've reviewed on this site. I have my account on fanfiction.net.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..........where's Sasuke? HE CAN'T JUST LEAVE!!!! DIDN'T THEY COME TO AN AGREEMENT ALREADY?! MAKE HIM COME BACK YOU EVIL, EVIL AUTHOR!! ...oh, and did I mention that I really like your story? Anyway, update soon!
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOw! O-O this is beautiful! Nice job! I love the mental picture you give of Naruto! He really does seem angelic d(^-^)b
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I'm glad that we got a glimpse of Sasuke in this chapter, and I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to him.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny,its Sasuke who sounds divine.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! haha, did you know that there's a sasunaru, narusasu pic somewhere entitled The marriage of heaven and hell? haha, just a passing comment, completely unrelated to the fic itself. Well, goodluck with the fic! Ja!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah! Another chappie! Yeah! Please write more quickly! I really love this story!