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for Of Heaven and Hell

by harukakatana

person Ly
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter! I really want to know what will happen! ^^ Keep writing, and update soon!
person silverfox
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how sad *crying* i feel sorry for naruto to go to sleep in a warm imbrace and to wake to the cold of winter alone.


anyway no tome to be sad...great story so far i really loved the whole hooker out of rehab thing very amuzing i could just picture sasuke looking loke a hooker out of rehab..... hahahahahahaha!!!!

cant wait to see what happens in the next chapters so update soon....LIKE NOW OKAY


UNTIL THE NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!
person evil
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Sasuke and Naruto are such a cute couple here... *Gasp* Going against God?? O.O;;; That's scary... Well, keep up the good work!! And update soon!! ^___^
person spunglass
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is gooooood:D
*wibbles incoherently*
my brain is dead, or i would say more. suffice to say that i liked it. (the system of angels was interesting~)
person Winde
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG AKA give me more now!!! :3 I loved how this ended *nod nod* I loved the snow and the setting and I KNEW sasuke was a demon nyahahaha >:)~ I hope you keep it going and get the next chapter out soon or i'll have to keep poking you til you do :3
person Stace
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read it yet, but i just saw how long it is and NOW i understood why updating took you so long... XD Weee, ir's Friday! *crosses fingers for Snow Melts* Will review AFTER reading again. XD
person someone
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Your descriptions and vocabulary really bring the story to life! I love it and can't wait for an update!
person ZoeyJade
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I really really like where you're going with this. You're an excellant writer and I can't wait until you update. Keep up the good work. Hehe and if at all possible could we be seeing some sex in the next chapter or two. Heh. I've been craving a really good SasukeXNaruto fic and I believe this is it!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a goddess, am I? You are the goddess, my friend! I love this fic. It is so intricate, delicious, absorbing, and a thousand other things. You weave words like an expert knitter does cloth. Please continue writing and I will DEFINITELY continue writing. I'd be stupid not to. ^_^
person Stace
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"his body was like a pervert’s visual buffet"


SO TRUE. THIS is the best way how to describe Sasuke's body i've ever seen. GENIUS, girl. XD



Well, of story. YES. Good, good, girl. It has eveyrthing i love about your wirtting. Interesting storyline, amazing language, wonderful images, excellent dialouges.. It truely rocks.

I wish i knew how to thank you for writting so good. ^_^