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for Lust

by skeyeta

person chronicpervert
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i especially loved the neji part.... soooooooo hot <3333333333
person blueinferno
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is so kewl!!! i luv this!! you gotta do more!! but i hope Sasuke is a virgin (anal way) lol *blush* too fucking good man! now i wanna play sum ps2 games :P
person viciouscallisto
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my fucking hell!!! update update! i love this story dammit!!! sasuke-kun's character is great! he got kicked out of a school? that's cool. mmmm, i really like the itasasu interaction...i wouldn't mind more. and the whole neji/sasuke-kun moment was nice too...is anything else gonna happen with them? i liked that haku was in here too! he's not in alot of stories, so i'm glad he's here! i really like the interaction between temari, gaara, and sasuke-kun! it was funny and wonderfully messed up. oh, but what happened between naruto and sasuke-kun? did naruto break sasuke-kun's heart?! update update!!
person XxHauntedxX
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, Its just to awesome for words really, pleasee update soon *puppy eyes*
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED?! That is so mean. I love this story and you seem to have forgotten all about it! It's not fair, I say. Please update! I have been waiting 4-ever AND by the looks of things, you have left this story for good. Please re-consider and start writing more chapters for this story!
person elusia
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i luv this! so crack-a-licious xD

everyones perfect, i luv the roles u gave them all...maybe except for neji...'raven' scared me a bit (not that i didnt enjoy his 'lap dance' or anything hehe *shifty eyes*) besides that though, everyones surprsingly well-kept in character. luv the lil cameo by zabuza in the first chap too. and the person temari fucked...shikamaru right? ;)

anyways, good job. im not usually into fanfiction but this is so addictive - not only is the plot great (man..gotta love all that crack xD), but its actually very well written too. cant wait to see more pimping itachi and angsty sasuke hehe ;D
person blisblop
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well,I just have to find out more,where are you?I hope you are able soon.This has lots of ways to go and I wanna read the one you chose,its gonna be intence no doubt.Luck.
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cries-------------Why haven't you updated?! Oh what a crule world! I need more. What can I say, I'm addicted to this story!
person Finality
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting. I liked it a lot. The idea of Neji being a stripper puts a nice image into my head. XD Update soon.

~Finality.
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
( cries out in fustration ) Why haven't you updated?! I'm going to die if I don't read more! (Throughs self into wall) Please update, pretty please with sugar ontop? I really want to know what happens.

Your waiting fan,

rAiNwAtEr